Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
Good effort. Somehow the proportions and the likeness do not appear to be in place.The 2 pigeons with their backs could have been placed in a different plane to lend diversity to the drawing

 Comment Written 24-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

seshadri_sreenivasan,
Thank you for your input.

Comment from kanagraj
Rally fine art. and the caption is excellent. simple ling work but the story is big. excellent teachnique. good impact. composition and colours are fine. over all i lkie it love presentation . very appricitable.

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 Comment Written 24-May-2010

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reply by the author on 25-May-2010

kanagraj,
you are welcome and thank you!