Comment from Deeps
This is a striking portrait of both boys. The boy on the left looks like he is one of life's thinkers the one on the left will take all challenges straight on and bulldoze his way through them.

The composition Focus and DOF are all good. You might want to adjust lighting levels. The whites are overexposed. Comes from all that sunshine.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011

Thank you very much for your encouraging review. Your impression of the boys is very similar to mine. You really have looked at the photo. Thanks especially for that.
I have already tried to adjust the background but it seems I have to work more. That tropical sun on the limestone is a pain.

Comment from Extra
Absolutely fantastic story photograph and you are so right in what you say in your description. Glad you put that int. Nicely exposed, nice contrast between the two boys - one looking at you, the other looking away. Great work, good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2011

Thank you, I appreciate your encouraging review and the kind wishes very much.