Running Against Time
trying to catch time10 total reviews
Comment from Wrights Wow Pictures
Initial Impact 6
Does Title Match Picture? 6
Composition 6
Lighting 6
Creativity of Presentation 6
Story Telling Ability 6
Technique 6
Color Harmony 6
Center of Interest 6
Notes 6
Overall Impact 6
Total 66
Average 6
Comments: You are going to have to take a cyber 6.0 because I am all out of the real things. I really enjoyed this piece of work and I am going to make it one of my favorites. I review somewhere between 30-50 pieces of art each day 5 days a week. I have fewer favorites than the days I have reviewed. That means that this art is very special to me. It struck a strong emotion in my being. I know the feeling of running against time. You can never win. I am starting to take time for myself. FAR is one of those things. If you can't guess I really like this work. I can't think of a thing to change except next time give time a little more room to roam on the right. Great Job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Initial Impact 6
Does Title Match Picture? 6
Composition 6
Lighting 6
Creativity of Presentation 6
Story Telling Ability 6
Technique 6
Color Harmony 6
Center of Interest 6
Notes 6
Overall Impact 6
Total 66
Average 6
Comments: You are going to have to take a cyber 6.0 because I am all out of the real things. I really enjoyed this piece of work and I am going to make it one of my favorites. I review somewhere between 30-50 pieces of art each day 5 days a week. I have fewer favorites than the days I have reviewed. That means that this art is very special to me. It struck a strong emotion in my being. I know the feeling of running against time. You can never win. I am starting to take time for myself. FAR is one of those things. If you can't guess I really like this work. I can't think of a thing to change except next time give time a little more room to roam on the right. Great Job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Hi WOW, I am incredibly honored by your phenomenal review. The fact you are making this one of your "favorites" is such a complimentary gesture I am speachless. It means a lot that you REALLY like this. I'm glad your starting to take a little more time for yourself. We all need some of those precious moments. Bless your heart and thank you for such an exquisite review. I am smiling from ear to ear. :o) Hugs and Smiles, Helvi
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You are welcome
Comment from Kaluphotography
Very creative composition. I like the creativity of the photo.
It has a great center of interest and great attention to detail.
Thanks for sharing Lou
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Very creative composition. I like the creativity of the photo.
It has a great center of interest and great attention to detail.
Thanks for sharing Lou
Comment Written 10-Jun-2011
Comment from donkeyoatey
What a super idea, and your execution is wonderful..you created a super sense of movement, and the feel of rushing is so well done that it makes my heart race! The composition adds so much to the overall feel. Donkeyoatey
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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What a super idea, and your execution is wonderful..you created a super sense of movement, and the feel of rushing is so well done that it makes my heart race! The composition adds so much to the overall feel. Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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You definitely cheer me up with your awesome reviews. :o) I feel like I just got a six from you my friend. Your mixed media is SO super I am in awe when you like mine. Thank You SO much! :o) Helvi
Comment from jsweeney
A very interesting photograph. I like the distortion of the clock and the fade-away of the person chasing time. The "First Place" ribbon confused me until I read your Author Note. Then I thought - what about a finish line ribbon being broken by the running time?
Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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A very interesting photograph. I like the distortion of the clock and the fade-away of the person chasing time. The "First Place" ribbon confused me until I read your Author Note. Then I thought - what about a finish line ribbon being broken by the running time?
Great job!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Hi Jsweeney, I thought about adding a finish line, but in one way the race never ends. THe first place ribbon just suggests this is a race no one can win. Time's first place ribbon is given in default. He already knows he's won before the race begins. Thanks for bringing the subject up. I enjoy sharing thoughts with other artists. :o) Hopes this helps in expaining what I wanted to show. I'm glad you thought this was interesting. Thank you for reviewing! :o) Helvi
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That makes sense. I guess in the long run we'll die first, eh?
Comment from mnmcarta
Very nice idea. I would have left the clock a little more looking like a clock but the idea is nice and well executed. :)
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Very nice idea. I would have left the clock a little more looking like a clock but the idea is nice and well executed. :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
Comment from amfunny
This would make a great poster.
Very creatively done and very original.
I love it. You did a great job on this one. :)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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This would make a great poster.
Very creatively done and very original.
I love it. You did a great job on this one. :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2011
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Awww Thanks my friend! It means a lot that you like this. I am honored by your kind comments! :o) Helvi
Comment from tedmunro
hi there Helvi. this is a very creative photograph. too bad you were too late for the contest. its a fun photograph with a good story to tell. a pleasure to review and ty for sharing
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hi there Helvi. this is a very creative photograph. too bad you were too late for the contest. its a fun photograph with a good story to tell. a pleasure to review and ty for sharing
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
Comment from BurntOfferingsart
Very creative shot .
Nice storytelling ., very good explanation .
Good title
The explanation greatly aids a reviewer in analyzing composition and impact .
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Very creative shot .
Nice storytelling ., very good explanation .
Good title
The explanation greatly aids a reviewer in analyzing composition and impact .
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
Comment from Angelheart The First
Helvi,
You would have had a good chance of winning that contest with this great creation.It makes a great statement and you showed this in a most creative way.You put a lot of work into this and I enjoyed it very much.My first review of the day and I love it!
Angelheart :)
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Helvi,
You would have had a good chance of winning that contest with this great creation.It makes a great statement and you showed this in a most creative way.You put a lot of work into this and I enjoyed it very much.My first review of the day and I love it!
Angelheart :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011
Comment from AntonH
Facinating imagery, well executed, though I feel "Time is running away with me" would be a more appropriate title, albeit the meanings are pretty much the same. Nice work!
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Facinating imagery, well executed, though I feel "Time is running away with me" would be a more appropriate title, albeit the meanings are pretty much the same. Nice work!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2011