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Comment from Sorin Fota


The eyes are so beautiful so that the picture does not deserve a lower mark. A very nice face and a very nice picture. All technicalities are to be appreciated. However I do not like the eye on the left too close to the shadow, impending on its color. Lips appear to be well designed, it is a loss they are not displayed. Why do not try to cut in half vertically, on the line of the shadow on the left side of the nose, excluding the left eye, but including the lips... I would like to see the result!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    thank you
Comment from gmink


Nice colors and well cropped. The focus seems a bit soft around the pupils of the eyes. Also a bit too much light on the right of the nose. If you can do a retake I would focus directly on the pupils an reduce the light on the right side just a little.

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    thank you
Comment from GeorgiaGirl94


Nice Shot! I like the dark shadow on the side of the face & just a hint of the red lips! Very nice.

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
    wow, thank you for the high score
Comment from cynnocence


Great capture! The eyes are wonderfully expressive. I like the balance of the eyebrows and the bridge of the nose, but leaving the bottom lip out seems somehow wrong. Also, a bit of cropping could be done on the left hand side for balance. thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    thank you
Comment from Angelheart The First


I believe you made a very good attempt however,there are a few things that could be
corrected.The eyes are lovely
but the lighting on the right seems a bit harsh with the left side being too dark.
The cropped out lips would look better fully in the shot.
Point is...you tried!
Angelheart :)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    the light on the left was on purpose
    thanks
reply by Angelheart The First on 18-Jan-2012
    Okay,just being honest!!
Comment from heedamarie


Yes beautiful eyes. For myself I would have cropped out her lips and left just the nose and eyes. Good lighting and like the shadow into black. smiling eyes good shot.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    thank you
Comment from Tony B


Good shadowing follows this portrait, the lighting was well thought out, it is interesting that you choose to crop at the middle of the upper lip, bold and presented well, good show.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    thanks a lot
Comment from Max Giddings


Very interesting composition. A very pretty woman with beautiful truly expressive eyes placed in a really great spot in the frame.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
    thank you very much
Comment from GinaR


This is a sweet tribute to your subject in this work. I love the shading. Your lighting is fantastic. It could be a great teaching tool to show pupil reaction to light also.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
    thanks a lot
Comment from canon shooter


They say the eyes tells the story and this is very true with this one. She sure has beautiful ones and great lighting to capture them.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
    thanks a lot