Storm over the city
Stormy clouds, city scape5 total reviews
Comment from LorrainePurviance
I like this but the water will usually reflect the sky, so it seems a bit out of place, I still think you could tone map or do something with it ever try just changing it all to BW then again the city seems bright and sunlit while the rest of the sky seems dark and foreboding...I see what you are trying to do, keep up the good work
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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I like this but the water will usually reflect the sky, so it seems a bit out of place, I still think you could tone map or do something with it ever try just changing it all to BW then again the city seems bright and sunlit while the rest of the sky seems dark and foreboding...I see what you are trying to do, keep up the good work
Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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Sorry it has taken so long for me to answer your review. It always means so much to get your advice, Your work is so fantastic and you have really helped me a lot to learn how to focus on what ever my main subject would be. I see exactly what you were talking about in this piece, thanks so much again, your the best
Lynn
Comment from cleo85
I like that one much better. Looks better when the water touches the grass. I liked the sky in the other one, but these storm clouds are an excellent backdrop. Can you make the river a bit darker? I think that would look even angrier. [I think there is a tiny s;pot in the left corner unpainted. Put a bushel grass were the white spot is on the left.] Sorry to hear of your new illness. I hope you feel better soon!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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I like that one much better. Looks better when the water touches the grass. I liked the sky in the other one, but these storm clouds are an excellent backdrop. Can you make the river a bit darker? I think that would look even angrier. [I think there is a tiny s;pot in the left corner unpainted. Put a bushel grass were the white spot is on the left.] Sorry to hear of your new illness. I hope you feel better soon!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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Thanks sao much cleo and so sorry for taking so long to answer your review. I still have a lot of trouble with water, but thanks for the advice, I have since redone this piece and used your advice along with a few others and its amazing how much better one piece can be with just a few hints.
Thanks again Cleo for hanging in there with me.
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You're very welcome.
Do you have trouble with the water or the weather? [Your note says water] Sorry to hear of any trouble you have. Have trouble myself. It is spring and my allergies are worse than ever. I understand. ~Cleo
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LOL no Imeant I have trouble painting water..hey you gave me a much needed smile LOL
thanks my friend
lynn
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I wasn't sure what trouble, but affraid that your asthma was triggered by the weather.
Guess I have to send you some water photos?
Comment from table
first things first hope u get better soon, and it is a nice picture u have created with nice colours i like the blue and the buildings colour thgat maTCH WITH THE sea or river, that made a real nice picture well done table.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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first things first hope u get better soon, and it is a nice picture u have created with nice colours i like the blue and the buildings colour thgat maTCH WITH THE sea or river, that made a real nice picture well done table.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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Thanks table for such a nice review and kind words, I guess saying that i was in the hospital got the sympathy review vote after all LOL
Thanks again
Lynn
Comment from turbotexan
Hope you are on the mend, understand motivation is everything. I think you did a fine job, the yellow and orange pop out and the clouds and water speak ominous equally well. I might have cropped the grass out of the picture but other than that, super.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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Hope you are on the mend, understand motivation is everything. I think you did a fine job, the yellow and orange pop out and the clouds and water speak ominous equally well. I might have cropped the grass out of the picture but other than that, super.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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Sorry it has taken so long to respond to your review, your words are far too kind and I have to a agree that grass just doesn't belong.
Guess I have to mention more often if I'm in the hospital or sick, it makes for the sympathy review LOL
You way too kind and it is deeply appreciated
Lynn
Comment from jesuel
what a beautiful piece of art the color composition is really great and it pops the depth and perspective are really great beautiful work here
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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what a beautiful piece of art the color composition is really great and it pops the depth and perspective are really great beautiful work here
Comment Written 23-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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For such a talented artist I am always overwhelmed by your reviews of my work. With this piece you are way too kind, and it is deeply appreciate
Lynn
