Comment from Terjondy
This is a wonderful photo of and outdoor market and commendable that you captured this on a Browny box. The composition lets it down a little because the figure in pink leads the eye away from the main scene. Try cropping the photo just before the pink figure and the entire photo is a lot more powerful.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012

will do- already been advised, not used to photography, my pencil would have naturally added the head- if you see what I mean. thank you.

Comment from Glass i
The setting has fundamental charm and nice body language in some of the subjects. The ambient lighting was not great and it is a pity that the lady in pink's head was clipped. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2012

the lighting was my fault, I tried to edit and did it the wrong way, as it was midsummer and there was too much sunlight in the pic.- I am afraid I have a cheap camera and it takes what it sees, however I might take that lady off the picture, I 'll try it. Thank you