Comment from gidavidson
A very good edit here. Like it. Your pov is wonderful, with your your bg edit and well framed. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012

thanks so much, I really appreciate the great review... I was experimenting and not sure how people would react. Much appreciated.