marbles play
Digital art of a girl playing with marbles.2 total reviews
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
The angle is good, I like the way you have composed her, good depth and perspective in the drawing in that regard. I do think that the top of her head should be in the frame. i am also thinking her flesh need some more tonal variation so that the face, like the arms and fingers has more structure. i would also consider showing some variation in the hair to give it texture. nice start, need some more work in my opinion to really make it a better image.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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The angle is good, I like the way you have composed her, good depth and perspective in the drawing in that regard. I do think that the top of her head should be in the frame. i am also thinking her flesh need some more tonal variation so that the face, like the arms and fingers has more structure. i would also consider showing some variation in the hair to give it texture. nice start, need some more work in my opinion to really make it a better image.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your informative critique of my art.
VMarguarite
Comment from photobeat
love your work very much my friend, the details are fantastic and really love her shadow, well done indeed, beny ")
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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love your work very much my friend, the details are fantastic and really love her shadow, well done indeed, beny ")
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you very kindly for admiring my artwork, and I also appreciate your 5-Star rating.
VMarguarite