Comment from MinoYasue
I like the motif and the composition is good. I like the camera angle for the perspective. I wish the display image to be little bigger. So we can see in details. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2013

Comment from smart click
its a good idea the frame and shows potential, the details are good and certain amount of angle but you have sniped her hea d slightly off, and the tableon the right handside isa littledistracting maybe if you cropped that side and a tad of teh left handside it might project what your trying to ge tover in this image, its a little blurred so perhaps needs sharpening a tad, nice effortmaybe try using brightness clip toenhance it but off course its all am atter of waht you want your image to look like and only a suggestion

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2013