PTSD, THE unspoken fear
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Comment from Barb Hornegisaspca
You did excellent. The picture tells it all. I noticed the shadow of the chains before I read the authors notes. I had 16 years of broken bones and burns and black eyes. A song or a person yelling puts me in a corner. This is perfect in every way. absolutely. I can use this.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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You did excellent. The picture tells it all. I noticed the shadow of the chains before I read the authors notes. I had 16 years of broken bones and burns and black eyes. A song or a person yelling puts me in a corner. This is perfect in every way. absolutely. I can use this.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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I wanted to really thank you for the inspiration. daughter cried when she SW this and said that's how she feels. It still makes me cry to think that my little girl is in so much pain from the hands of others and I can't protect her. She loved the painting and told me to tell you thank you for giving me the inspiration to do this. I can't wait to read your poem with this. You and my daughter have alot in common. She will be 30 in January and she still suffers daily. Her ex put her in that wheelchair and she suffers in a great deal of pain daily not only physical but emotional;. but like you she is a survivor no mater how she see's herself. thank you again Barb
Diane..lynnkah
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Wow. barb_horne@live.com if you need me.
I understand. I had broken bones, burns, dislocations, black eyes. That was the first. The second was the mental abuser. That was worse,..,I think...
She is a survivor...tell her to tell her story. I started it with my poem, tell her Ichallence her to continue.
your picture was perfect. it told the emotional and physical result.
Comment from simonka
Hi Lynnkah! Nice to see your still here, unfortunately, sorry to hear about our family's traumatic illness, it must be very hard on you all. On the bright side of things, I have been away awhile, and in my absence, I have checked out your work and you have improved incredibly, your work has matured and definitely made it your own, your style and expertise is grown 100% ! I am very happy for you, you have done tremendous work! Your friend, Simonka.
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Hi Lynnkah! Nice to see your still here, unfortunately, sorry to hear about our family's traumatic illness, it must be very hard on you all. On the bright side of things, I have been away awhile, and in my absence, I have checked out your work and you have improved incredibly, your work has matured and definitely made it your own, your style and expertise is grown 100% ! I am very happy for you, you have done tremendous work! Your friend, Simonka.
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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it is so good to hear from you again. I've missed seeing you on here. I am rarely on this site anymore and I have missed seeing a lot of wonderful talent, yours included. thank you deeply for such a kind compliment .
again it's great to hear from you again.
lynnkah
Comment from cleo85
A perfect artistic interpretation of your theme. Even without your comments I would understand the meaning perfectly. The 'invisible' chains which still bind her to the past are a genial idea. It is almost perfectly painted, but change the seem of the dress, that you deserve the rating I give you. The dress is not from a skin fitting material. This means the fall of the dress at the seem should have some folds and the seen is not in a line, but wavy. You have that fold, and the shading on her tights. You just need to change the seem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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A perfect artistic interpretation of your theme. Even without your comments I would understand the meaning perfectly. The 'invisible' chains which still bind her to the past are a genial idea. It is almost perfectly painted, but change the seem of the dress, that you deserve the rating I give you. The dress is not from a skin fitting material. This means the fall of the dress at the seem should have some folds and the seen is not in a line, but wavy. You have that fold, and the shading on her tights. You just need to change the seem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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wow Cleo a six! I never expected that. and thank you for the information about the skirt, I'll change that now. thank you again
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You're most welcome :-)