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Comment from drmerlin


I really love your composition here. I also like the black and white treatment. Your model's expression is really interesting. Given the title of the piece, I would suggest that you needed more sharpness and detail in the eyes; certainly the model's left eye needs to be sharper. I wonder whether a greater depth of field might have helped. Also, I am not sure what is going on around her chin and mouth. Nice work though.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
    thanks a lot
Comment from stardust12375


she is a beautiful woman. the black and white makes her stand out even more than if she had been in color. the only thing i wish that the top and bottom of her head was not cut off or since you said that you were focusing on the eyes that the only thing there was the eyes. 4.5

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
    thnak you
Comment from jesuel


What a beautiful portrait I really like how you have used black and white it really creates some great contrast and depth fine work here

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
    wow, thank you very much
Comment from M. Celeste


You have captured two separate views of emotion regarding her eyes. If I cover the right half of her face, I get a feeling of sadness in her eyes like something is wrong. When I cover the left side, she looks like a different person with life in her eye. This is a very cool shot. Try it. Great job.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
    thank you very much
Comment from Mollie213


Very, very nice.
Really like the black/white.
You have shadowed one side
of the face perfectly.
The eyes look very sad.
I would not change one thing
about this.
Beautiful

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
    Thank you
Comment from RochelleW


This is an absolutely gorgeous portrait. Her eyes are so beautiful. Great impact and detail. The lighting is perfect. You're focus is very crisp and sharp. Fantastic work!!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
    Yes, her eyes are just amazing, thanks
Comment from Angelheart The First


I like what you did here Galia. It has really good impact as I think you created an almost pleading portrait.
The lighting in this is fantastic and gives the portrait a very dramatic feel.
Great job~
Angelheart :)

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
    Thank you very much
reply by Angelheart The First on 14-Dec-2013
    My pleasure :)
Comment from Mara del Mar


Great portrait. Good color and fine details, like the angle, nice lighting and beautiful facial expression. Excellent dark background and good frame. As always, great job.
Mara

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    thank you very much
Comment from Ed Parmiter


The expressive ability of a Woman,s eyes and facial features has no equal in man nor beast,,,this portrait shows this reality very clearly it also has convinced the models hair to join and partake of the expressive feast for our eyes,,,silent shadows and those kissable lips add value and property,,thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    thank you
Comment from Doris1022


nice shot very professional. well done.

the light is dramatic and well balanced on the face for the cool factor.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    thanks a lot