Comment from photobeat
so cute work my friend, love the pose, color and the way you created it,color harminy is perfect, really well done, beny ")

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014

Thank you very much for your kind and welcomed review of my art, and I appreciate your 5-Star rating.

VMarguarite :)

Comment from susanlen
This is the kind of work I might have created using software. I am very fond of silhouettes against a sky, especially a red sky with sunset. I like the composition a great deal. I would have left a tad more space at the top of the frame. The heads are nearly off the edge of the work. I am not too keen on the line across the bottom either. I realise this represents grass but feel more wispy grass would work better. The black line is too solid, if you get my meaning! The figures are not in the centre of the frame precisely enough. I think they work being at the centre, ignoring the rule of 2/3rds, but you have to make sure they are precisely at the centre, which they are not currently. Just crop a little down the right hand side to balance the work up properly.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014

Thank you for your review and suggestions.

VMarguarite