Comment from suenethery
Oh, no, snow.
Lol.
Excellent initial impact. I like the technique you used.
I like your creativity and imagination. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014

thanks for the great review