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The War Begins

story line The protectors

11 total reviews 
Comment from theteleport


Here the lighting on the character would be orange and also on the grass, because of the sky. If he isn't standing right in front of a large white glowing thing. It could look like that here.
Oh its not from one single 3d application, but rather a collage? Then you can add the colour orange in photoshop or GIMP or other image editing software, you can made a layer of orange, and lower the opaque to a more transparent layer, so that you get a more feeling of its on the same place, where the light is even or how to say it, think you understand..

I like the character, sad you had to make him twice, hate it when such happens and you loose files.

Strange and exciting story with morphed humans and morphed animals, good luck with this Lynnkah! Dreamlight 3d can help you a lot! Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
    I knew there was something completely off with this and you pegged it. Thank you so much. You are a huge help.
    Diane..lynnkah
reply by theteleport on 18-Jan-2015
    Glad it helped you :) Your welcome!
Comment from snowblaze


I'm not a huge fan of digital art... but I can see that you've manipulated the computer program quite well. I think the piece is a bit closely cropped on the top.

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
    thank you snowblaze for the review. I had him sat back further at first but then you couldn't see the detail in the horses armor so that's why I chose the close up. thank you for your input it means a lot
    lynnkah
Comment from Shmore


Awesome initial impact.
Great work.
Colours are lovely, details are amazing, excellent depth.
A really cool character and a handsome mount.
I like the grassy foreground, the glistening water and colourful background.
Great job!

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
    thank you for an awesome review it means a lot
    lynnkah
reply by Shmore on 20-Nov-2014
    You are welcome! Take care!
Comment from soulfeeder


Your brave warrior, the stunning sunset, lush grass blades, and greenish water, really made an interesting composition. Excellent color contrast and framing placement. A-plus on creativity and artistic presentation. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
    thank you soulfeeder for such an outstanding review. it means a lot
    lynnkah
Comment from Mara del Mar


Oh, sorry listen this! All the beautiful works that you had done! Well, already not regretting worth, so, we go to enjoy the present. Love the details and the facial expression, like the landscape on background and beautiful colors. Well done
Mara

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
    thank you Mara for a kind review and taking the time to write one. I always look forward to y0ur reviews.
    thank you again
    lynnkah
Comment from Aesma


very nice image. the colors are awesome I like the orange sky and the water its really cool. the warrior looks very focused

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
    thank you so much for your review
    lynnkah
Comment from Solway Lady


Wonderful colors in this art work the sky is so strong and contrasts beautifully with the grass. Detail of the shield and the horse is brilliant,wouldn't want to meet this warrior on my walk by the water!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
    LOL thank you for the kind review glad you enjoyed this
    lynnkah
Comment from jesuel


What a great piece of art you have created here the color composition is great I really like the armor and the horse is great beautiful work here

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
    thank you Jesuel your far too kind.
    lynnkah
Comment from Jairos


Awesome Creation, Good Frame Nice colors and good Depth, the b/g is Gorgeus, good Work, good initial impact, Jaios

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
    thank you Jairos for taking the time to review this piece and giving it such a good review I am deeply grateful
    lynnkah
Comment from Life is but a dream.


Has a very three dimensional feeling to it Diane, it pops.



1. The dimensional quality of image is precisely drawn and realistic.

2. YOur attention to the colour has further punched this out with reds/oranges/ against green and as you know they are contrasting colours on the colour wheel and support each other greatly.

The only constructive criticism I can offer for improvement is that had you composed it differently, giving more room for the warrior to ride into it would have given the image more KAPOW power and you may want to bring his leg into focus for us as it is blurred.

Morphing from man to animal back to man....now that is an interesting concept.

I like it.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
    I have got to admit I always love reading your reviews. You are always so in depth and you make them interesting to read. Thank you for your input it always is helpful
    lynnkah