Beautiful Gaze
A portrait showing composition balance40 total reviews
Comment from Natures Paparazzi
Well your very beautiful daughter and your obvious fantasist artistic abilities made a beautiful portrait!!! Great shading and detail!!!! Gorgeous portrait!!!!!
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Well your very beautiful daughter and your obvious fantasist artistic abilities made a beautiful portrait!!! Great shading and detail!!!! Gorgeous portrait!!!!!
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you so much.
Comment from jesuel
what a great portrait its a little fuzzy this would be really great if it was clear but thats a technical issue the portrait is excellent very beautiful and well executed sorry out of sixes so i have to give you a cyber six great job
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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what a great portrait its a little fuzzy this would be really great if it was clear but thats a technical issue the portrait is excellent very beautiful and well executed sorry out of sixes so i have to give you a cyber six great job
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you Jesuel. I tried many times to get a good picture of this work, but it just wouldn't come.
Comment from Alveria
You have a very beautiful daughter and this is a lovely portrait of her. I like the close up of her pleasant facial expression. Good framing and visual impact. Well done. ~Alveria
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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You have a very beautiful daughter and this is a lovely portrait of her. I like the close up of her pleasant facial expression. Good framing and visual impact. Well done. ~Alveria
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Alveria, I thank you for this very encouraging review.
Comment from artbysandy
She does certainly have a lovely gaze you have captured her eyes beautifully and the shading is fab a very lovely portrait thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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She does certainly have a lovely gaze you have captured her eyes beautifully and the shading is fab a very lovely portrait thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Sandy, this is something dear to my heart. My spirit knows this face.
Comment from drmerlin
Whilst I really like the composition here (your daughter makes a very striking model) I am less keen on the way that the portrait is lit. The highlights are blown out so that much of the detail from the models face are missing. Similarly, all of the detail in the hair has gone. Where you do have some pixel information, the appearance seems grainy to me. I am unclear whether this was a regular photograph that has been over-stylised or whether you used on-camera flash which has flattened the face. Sorry....
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reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Whilst I really like the composition here (your daughter makes a very striking model) I am less keen on the way that the portrait is lit. The highlights are blown out so that much of the detail from the models face are missing. Similarly, all of the detail in the hair has gone. Where you do have some pixel information, the appearance seems grainy to me. I am unclear whether this was a regular photograph that has been over-stylised or whether you used on-camera flash which has flattened the face. Sorry....
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Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Wow, What can I say. Thank you for reviewing my work.
Comment from Tuccibella
I thought this was a photo! Beautiful job. I really like the intensity in her eyes and nice job with the cheekbone and lips. Light balance is good and dark undertones are nice. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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I thought this was a photo! Beautiful job. I really like the intensity in her eyes and nice job with the cheekbone and lips. Light balance is good and dark undertones are nice. Well done!
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Dear Tuccibella, I am so grateful to you for your very uplifting review. Thank you.
Comment from Cfuhchs1
I like your sense of sophistication in this Art Work. It is so sweet and thoughtful to capture your child through your artistic hand . I like the concept and I wish I could do the same to my boys. Good luck to this contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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I like your sense of sophistication in this Art Work. It is so sweet and thoughtful to capture your child through your artistic hand . I like the concept and I wish I could do the same to my boys. Good luck to this contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you so much for your good wishes, and your great review
Comment from lannyroff
First of all your daughter is lovely. Your pencil work is, as usual, flawless, the work certainly shows the balance you sought. Subdued color helps to define the beauty of the model. All-in-all another enticing work. Best,of luck in the co test.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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First of all your daughter is lovely. Your pencil work is, as usual, flawless, the work certainly shows the balance you sought. Subdued color helps to define the beauty of the model. All-in-all another enticing work. Best,of luck in the co test.
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Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you so much Lanny, for this wonderful review.
Comment from Barb J
You have achieved the balance you were looking for in this portrait. Beautifully rendered. Great details and shading. Her eyes are just stunning! Life is what this has. Very nice! Thanks for sharing and gl in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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You have achieved the balance you were looking for in this portrait. Beautifully rendered. Great details and shading. Her eyes are just stunning! Life is what this has. Very nice! Thanks for sharing and gl in the contest!
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you So Much Barbara.
Comment from refman
Excellent drawing.A very well balanced piece of work.You have captured the beauty and the expressive features as well.You have made great use of shading and tones.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Excellent drawing.A very well balanced piece of work.You have captured the beauty and the expressive features as well.You have made great use of shading and tones.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you so much for the very fantastic review, and for the 6 stars.