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Pen and ink Pointillism II

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these are drawing created by hand using the ink

24 total reviews 
Comment from faisoft


This bird painting is really eye catchy. Color contrast of black and white is nice. The shadowing is OK. Keep it up, my friend. Nice work. Have a nice day. faisoft

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2006
    faisoft, thank you for the review... much appreciated... have great day.. LvO
Comment from sarnewfie


i love the wing position, and the gracefulness of the head that the pigeon is so well known for having, you did well on the placement of the birds, leaves one have to finish the image of a few of them in their imagination.

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2006
    sarnewfie, thank you for the great comments... much appreciated... have great day.. LvO
Comment from Dazzleme


this is lovely. You have done a great job constructing this. Your have a wonderful talent. I like the composition here. the pigeou stands out so nicely here. Great detail.

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Dazzleme, thank you for your time and the kind comments, much appreciated... take care cheers.. LvO
Comment from Diamondeyes


EXCELLENT! Who is Stanley? This is magnificent to me! The dots forming the pigeons and the white area being left white, AWESOME WORK! I know this has to take a long time to get it down on paper, using just dots of ink. Fantastic job. Thank you so much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Diamondeyes, i get all kinds of weird messages about my work, Stanley is like my nemesis, he sends me e-mail, he does not believe these are all done by hand using dots.. so ever now and again I send him a little message, through this site. thanks for the great review and your wonderful support of my work.. really do appreciate it... take care...cheers... LvO
Comment from Diannatilley


how unigue to post it in section. But could you scan it sections and then in your ps sew it back together so that you could show the whole image.
I like this one is like all of your work, wonderful!
But I would love to see the entire image.

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Dianna, I was thinking of trying to photograph the whole image and the seeing how it come up on the computer screen... may do that as the last post to this image sseries... we'll see how it goes... as always thanks for the great support... take care be talking with you... cheers... LvO
Comment from Eastern Glory


Very good drawing bird in the sky
Athought the picture is come with black and white colour,I love it for the lighting and harmony of this kind of mood.
THere are many details parts in those birds that make them seem more really,but aslo have some fantasy feel!!

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Eastern Glory, thank you... so what would make it excellent? take care ... cheers... LvO
Comment from linda5


wow, i think you did the wings fantastically with all the details of each separate feather. this one looks like a wonderfully grainy photo. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Linda5, thank you for the review and the time to write them, much appreciated ... have agreat day cheers... LvO
Comment from africanartist


Hmm, quite interesting work here. but still needs more improvements in the area of creativity. There is enough dept shown on your work but looks too artificial in the movement of your strokes.

Did you ever realize that you could have used different pen nibs to interprete the forms and the land scapes?

Try it and see the unique effect it will have on your art piece.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Africanartist, Hmmm, another Stanley... what you see is the birds in the sky, Hmmm, yes but that would be to easy, try varying the size of the dot using just perssure (more of a challage, wouldn't you agree?)... thanks for the comments... Hmm, it really is great image isn't it? have great day... Cheers... LvO
Comment from Linda77578


This is very nicely done, I like the detail and the lighting and shading is beautiful. It is sad that the entrie picture will not work either via scan or on this site as I believe it is probably spectacualr. Really do like the technique, thank you for sharing. Linda

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Linda77578, thank you and your comments are greatly appreciated by me, have a graet day, cheers... LvO
Comment from huberta


perfectly done, great artwork! I like it, even if I don't like pigeons, this ones are cute. No, what one really appreciates the way its done, with lot of care and patients.
Thank you, looking forward to see the next part.
Regards
Huberta

 Comment Written 31-May-2006


reply by the author on 31-May-2006
    Huberta, thank you for the high praise and I appreciate the comments, have a great day... cheers... LvO