A Summer Of Green trees
Modern Landscape Painting17 total reviews
Comment from Trajan
Interesting piece.
I do like the graduated tonal values, light coming in from the left through the trees.
That is awesome.
There are some majors issues with the sky and foreground however.
I feel like if you cropped out more of the foreground it would be much stronger. The reflection in the water does not mirror what you see in the mountain beyond.
I feel like you rushed the sky and sort of airbrushed it away as an after thought.
Also, is really reads as a photograph with a few paint filters utilized in the foreground.
As I said, the center of the piece is just amazing.
If you cropped out most of the sky and foreground, just that slice is incredible.
I love the piece, but I think you need to stand back take a look and reduce a wee bit.
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Interesting piece.
I do like the graduated tonal values, light coming in from the left through the trees.
That is awesome.
There are some majors issues with the sky and foreground however.
I feel like if you cropped out more of the foreground it would be much stronger. The reflection in the water does not mirror what you see in the mountain beyond.
I feel like you rushed the sky and sort of airbrushed it away as an after thought.
Also, is really reads as a photograph with a few paint filters utilized in the foreground.
As I said, the center of the piece is just amazing.
If you cropped out most of the sky and foreground, just that slice is incredible.
I love the piece, but I think you need to stand back take a look and reduce a wee bit.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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I appreciate your very useful and learned observations. I shall definitely try to improve upon it as suggested. I thank you for your time and nice review. I do appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from RV Images
Very nice piece~
The time it took must have been so tedious~ But the final product is such a nice piece to view! The colors and soft details are great~ Well done
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Very nice piece~
The time it took must have been so tedious~ But the final product is such a nice piece to view! The colors and soft details are great~ Well done
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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I thank you for your time and nice review. I do appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from Paul G.
I like the river going down the middle giving us the reflections and a line to follow. The trees on the shore give interest. Very nice and pleasant to view. Good luck. Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
I like the river going down the middle giving us the reflections and a line to follow. The trees on the shore give interest. Very nice and pleasant to view. Good luck. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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I thank you for your time and nice review. I do appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from MKFlood
Awesome creation. Water reflection is spot on. The depth is perfect. The shading is excellent. The details is excellent. The blend of color is awesome. The creation is well balance and very eye appealing to the viewer.very creative and awesome work overall (clapping)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
Awesome creation. Water reflection is spot on. The depth is perfect. The shading is excellent. The details is excellent. The blend of color is awesome. The creation is well balance and very eye appealing to the viewer.very creative and awesome work overall (clapping)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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I thank you for your time and nice review. I do appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from Neilnap773
impressive presentation and i recognise the style and love it ! The reflection is magical and cleverly created to show that shimmering effect.Super palette of colours representing the abundance of foliage that surrounds the lake...great work my friend and good luck
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
impressive presentation and i recognise the style and love it ! The reflection is magical and cleverly created to show that shimmering effect.Super palette of colours representing the abundance of foliage that surrounds the lake...great work my friend and good luck
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
Thanks so very much for the fine review! I really appreciate it!
Comment from GaliaG
a beautiful paint of a beautiful place
excellent position of the trees in the frame diagonal
good creativity and technique
good luck withthe contest and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
a beautiful paint of a beautiful place
excellent position of the trees in the frame diagonal
good creativity and technique
good luck withthe contest and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for your support. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
I missed the supplemental poem from the hunter...
Excellent choice of subject with Verdant overtone!
Impressive green tones in varying hues.
Impressive entry. Potential voters choice... Best of luck in the contest!
CONGRATULATIONS!
Fearless forecast!
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
I missed the supplemental poem from the hunter...
Excellent choice of subject with Verdant overtone!
Impressive green tones in varying hues.
Impressive entry. Potential voters choice... Best of luck in the contest!
CONGRATULATIONS!
Fearless forecast!
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for your support. Glad you liked it.