Sunrise girl
Watercolor22 total reviews
Comment from Trajan
Nicely done watercolor.
I love the composition, color and brushwork.
Her quite alluring smile is equally well done.
The one issue is the shoulder area and arm. Something is a little rigid and off in this area.
I think the shoulder needs more shading to define the direction of the arm.
Right now it looks like her arm is somewhat detached or jammed at a weird angle in her side.
It is well done. Keep working at it!
I see "La citta bella della Roma" in your future!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Nicely done watercolor.
I love the composition, color and brushwork.
Her quite alluring smile is equally well done.
The one issue is the shoulder area and arm. Something is a little rigid and off in this area.
I think the shoulder needs more shading to define the direction of the arm.
Right now it looks like her arm is somewhat detached or jammed at a weird angle in her side.
It is well done. Keep working at it!
I see "La citta bella della Roma" in your future!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much the thing about watercolors is they always dry lighter than when wet once again thank you so very much
Comment from Denise B
Really loving the colors of the sunrise against the dark clothing. Great facial features and body as usual. There is something going on the with shoulder definition that I wish was more defined. Maybe adding some cleavage? Or less back? Overall wonderful in watercolor. I have been playing with them as well and enjoying finding out what all these new types will do.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Really loving the colors of the sunrise against the dark clothing. Great facial features and body as usual. There is something going on the with shoulder definition that I wish was more defined. Maybe adding some cleavage? Or less back? Overall wonderful in watercolor. I have been playing with them as well and enjoying finding out what all these new types will do.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very the shoulder is there I always run into trouble with the watercolors drying lighter than when they are wet once again thank you so very much
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I can see that happening so easily
Comment from Wolfdancer13
Lovely watercolor, James! I love the palette of colors you placed behind your subject that is full of light, fire and color. Great textures in the lower frame but my eye is drawn to the shadowing and light to dark contrasting right in front of her body. Very atmospheric and edgy. Great featuring as always. Your watercolors on her clothing almost takes on the look and texture of oils.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Lovely watercolor, James! I love the palette of colors you placed behind your subject that is full of light, fire and color. Great textures in the lower frame but my eye is drawn to the shadowing and light to dark contrasting right in front of her body. Very atmospheric and edgy. Great featuring as always. Your watercolors on her clothing almost takes on the look and texture of oils.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much I am humbled and glad you like it working on another watercolor of Laura Croft once again thank you so very very much
Comment from GaliaG
wow, amazing paint, so alive and full of light
excellent paint of her facial expression and eyes
good composition, technique and presentation
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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wow, amazing paint, so alive and full of light
excellent paint of her facial expression and eyes
good composition, technique and presentation
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Muzamil Ahmed
Good! But you can improve it more.................
Work on giving shades and highlights. Other things are pretty good. Giving four stars. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Good! But you can improve it more.................
Work on giving shades and highlights. Other things are pretty good. Giving four stars. :-)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi jesuel
This is a fine and sultry painting of a beautiful lady reclining. I had to look closely at the pose though because it is not immediately evident that her left shoulder is pointing at the viewer which explains why her arm hangs a bit further to the right. Perharps darkening the shadow on the shoulder might help or it's more likely that I am going blind! :) Thanks for sharing this R
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Hi jesuel
This is a fine and sultry painting of a beautiful lady reclining. I had to look closely at the pose though because it is not immediately evident that her left shoulder is pointing at the viewer which explains why her arm hangs a bit further to the right. Perharps darkening the shadow on the shoulder might help or it's more likely that I am going blind! :) Thanks for sharing this R
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much raoul the only problem with watercolors is they dry a few shades lighter than what it looks wet once again thank you so very much ps you are rirght
Comment from karen zima
Love the beautiful sky behind the subject. The colors are magnificent. The pose is very interesting. Overall, this is a very nice artwork.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Love the beautiful sky behind the subject. The colors are magnificent. The pose is very interesting. Overall, this is a very nice artwork.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from El-mundo
A lovely, seductive but classy piece of this attractive young lady in black, lying on a black setting with a brilliantly contrasting array of yellow, purple, orange and brown in the background. The shades of black used are well distinguished and well well placed, giving an excellent and accurate human form and proportion to her - he facial features brilliantly and accurately drawn also, giving her personality, and as always amazing work on the eyes - beautiful green and penetrating as they stare right at you. Wonderful work, well done :)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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A lovely, seductive but classy piece of this attractive young lady in black, lying on a black setting with a brilliantly contrasting array of yellow, purple, orange and brown in the background. The shades of black used are well distinguished and well well placed, giving an excellent and accurate human form and proportion to her - he facial features brilliantly and accurately drawn also, giving her personality, and as always amazing work on the eyes - beautiful green and penetrating as they stare right at you. Wonderful work, well done :)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from MKFlood
Hey if you get tired of sunrise send her my way! Evil grin..lol. the facial expression is great. The body form and language is hot. The shading is excellent. The depth is excellent. The blend of color is awesome. The creation is balance and very eye appealing to the viewer. Very creative and awesome work overall (clapping)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Hey if you get tired of sunrise send her my way! Evil grin..lol. the facial expression is great. The body form and language is hot. The shading is excellent. The depth is excellent. The blend of color is awesome. The creation is balance and very eye appealing to the viewer. Very creative and awesome work overall (clapping)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very very much number one
Comment from Sean T Phelan
Cool,James!
She reminds me of Anna Kornikova! ( One of my favorites! )
It's a pleasantly colorful watercolor piece and it's certainly a lot of fun to view!
'Good Show',my friend! : )
~Sean
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Cool,James!
She reminds me of Anna Kornikova! ( One of my favorites! )
It's a pleasantly colorful watercolor piece and it's certainly a lot of fun to view!
'Good Show',my friend! : )
~Sean
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much sean I do believe I used her as a model once again thank you so very much
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COOL,James! : ) You're very welcome,my friend!