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Comment from Pamela Ruggiero


Hi, GaliaG. Now is a good time to ask why you always say nice words and then deduct half a point. Would be nice to know why. On this, I read the other reviews since I am not a photography buff. I see what Life is but a Dream means in her comment. Somehow that light on the pole does draw my eyes away from the woman. You captured her stern look well. Thank you for sharing and best of luck with this image

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    thank you very much and I will try to explain myself better
Comment from nikman


Quite a stern looking portrait presented here. Was there a particular reason why she looks so serious? Exposure and sharpness are good. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    thank you
Comment from Life is but a dream.


Galia, this woman has rather a wooden look to her and your bias is towards gray. Black and white photography needs to show black and white, here you do have a multitude of gray primarily.

See that harsh white pole digging into the frame at the right side? It draws out attention to it and away from this person.

Would you consider doing a closer crop and woking the gray scale more accurately?

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    thanks for the advice
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan


This is fine portrait Portrait photography. This displays the expression, personality, and mood of the subject.Good effort! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    thank you very much
Comment from Dick Lee Shia


Candid portrait.
Fine facial features & smooth textures.
Subtle illumination.
Ideal framing.
But quite obscure to illuminate details.

Nice perspective & narrow DOF.
Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    thank you