Comment from GaliaG
Lazy, out of breath or just disappointed with the world?

Excellent technique, composition and story telling

a pleasure to view

thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from Susan F. M. T.
Raoul,
A beautiful picture of this youth lying on top of what looks like a sand dune on the coast topped with grass & herbs shading his eyes as he gazes up into the heavens maybe watching birds swooping overhead. Created with very skilful draftsmanship beautiful choice, blending & application of your colours in bringing this scene to life.
Susan

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from With Grace
Looks like he has just run a marathon and is exhausted. Love what looks like a river bank he could be up on, listening to the sound of the running water. Just my imagination at work. Happy Sunday to you as well. Susan

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from dalebraatz
A great story telling of someone relaxing , love the colors and details and depth you have created here , a pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from Dick Lee Shia
A typical farm life recreational scene.

Impressive low vantage point but still showing facial details despite the slightly covered face.
Gorgeous shadow from the afternoon sun.
Dramatic presentation with a Great story telling factor.

Realistic compositional elements.
Nice use of primary colors plus a lot of verdant & muted earth tones.
Thanks for sharing...

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from suzannethompson2
Excellent drawing with your coloured and graphite pencils, Raoul. I love the pose you've drawn expressing a lazy day. Great use of colour, light and shade. Very good composition. Suzanne

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018