Comment from suffolkbrian
Thanks for entering contest,but the rules clearly state one or two children and I can see three,that aside think the idea was good but I would would have cropped this at the bottom timber and this would have made the focus much more on the front child,because you got a good expression in this,have you another with one or two children...Brian
p.s. somebody else changed theres

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018

I tried to change it, but I don't think it's letting me. It shows in my portfolio but not on the contest page. I think I may only be allowed to modify, not change. Bummer.

reply by suffolkbrian on 13-Jun-2018

your welcome,the one above actua;;y look better

Comment from dalebraatz
A very interesting looking family portrait story being told here, like the colors and details and depth, a pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks!

Comment from nikman
Not sure what these kids are playing at? So I am not sure this is an appropriate shot for the competition! I am sure though that it is a good photo though!! Love those innocent expressions. Exposure and sharpness are good. Well done and good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

I think taking a hayride would be considered play, but maybe you're right.

reply by nikman on 11-Jun-2018

Just my confusion!