My star girl
Charcoal and pastel16 total reviews
Comment from Trajan
Nice on this one Jesuel. I love the darks and lights. High contrast values really give it a punch.
My favorite part is the buttocks. You have captured that soft curve really well. Nice job!
Her hair and the pose is solid and well done.
The part that needs some touch up is the face. Her nose and eyes are not quite there. A little off if you know what I mean. Getting the face right is always hard because as humans we know what it should be because we see them everyday (unless you are a hermit.)
I would touch up that area, but overall its a great piece.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Nice on this one Jesuel. I love the darks and lights. High contrast values really give it a punch.
My favorite part is the buttocks. You have captured that soft curve really well. Nice job!
Her hair and the pose is solid and well done.
The part that needs some touch up is the face. Her nose and eyes are not quite there. A little off if you know what I mean. Getting the face right is always hard because as humans we know what it should be because we see them everyday (unless you are a hermit.)
I would touch up that area, but overall its a great piece.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Arctic Artist
Very beautiful!! I see why you called it "My Star Girl", she looks like shes glowing! Very cool! I love the details and shading!! I also like the 'glowing' effect that you have created! Thank you so much for sharing!! :D
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Very beautiful!! I see why you called it "My Star Girl", she looks like shes glowing! Very cool! I love the details and shading!! I also like the 'glowing' effect that you have created! Thank you so much for sharing!! :D
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Sharon Meda
Your use of light and dark shading has created a clear and well formed piece.
The shape is clear and the picture lovely.
Sharon
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Your use of light and dark shading has created a clear and well formed piece.
The shape is clear and the picture lovely.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Neilnap773
beautiful shape,gorgeous tones throughout and great structure and then bought to our attention with that cheeky seductive expression on her face...ooh so naughty and nice ..well done
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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beautiful shape,gorgeous tones throughout and great structure and then bought to our attention with that cheeky seductive expression on her face...ooh so naughty and nice ..well done
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Paul G.
James, she is gorgeous. Beyond that. She is stunning. I love the bright glow around her hair and face. Excellent detail and a great pose. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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James, she is gorgeous. Beyond that. She is stunning. I love the bright glow around her hair and face. Excellent detail and a great pose. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
Wow! You have a sure shot six here!:) I love this wonderful rendition for its grace, skill and creativity.Excellent color in tonal range of black and white.: complements the mood of the image. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Wow! You have a sure shot six here!:) I love this wonderful rendition for its grace, skill and creativity.Excellent color in tonal range of black and white.: complements the mood of the image. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much it means a lot that you like her
Comment from Linda Wetzel
I love the lighting in this piece. It makes the figure glow with the soft light of stars. She is well drawn and sensual. The dark background is perfect. The expressive strokes that created her hair give her a mussed just got out of bed look.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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I love the lighting in this piece. It makes the figure glow with the soft light of stars. She is well drawn and sensual. The dark background is perfect. The expressive strokes that created her hair give her a mussed just got out of bed look.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Tootie H2O
She is beautiful! The background is perfect for this piece. I love how you did her hair. Her eyes seem to look straight at the viewer and your shading is perfect. Beautiful piece.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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She is beautiful! The background is perfect for this piece. I love how you did her hair. Her eyes seem to look straight at the viewer and your shading is perfect. Beautiful piece.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Gorgeous portrait.
Seductive pose!
Impressive b&w rendition. Excellent tonal range. Nice features & textures. Good lighting & framing. Thanks for sharing...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Gorgeous portrait.
Seductive pose!
Impressive b&w rendition. Excellent tonal range. Nice features & textures. Good lighting & framing. Thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Sean T Phelan
Cool,James!
She makes me think of how certain members of the Unseeley Court of Faery look while projecting their Glamour at an unwary human!
Mysterious and Interesting!
'Good Show',my friend! : )
~Sean
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Cool,James!
She makes me think of how certain members of the Unseeley Court of Faery look while projecting their Glamour at an unwary human!
Mysterious and Interesting!
'Good Show',my friend! : )
~Sean
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very very much
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You're very welcome,James! : )