Comment from suzannethompson2
Another excellent cartoon, Mark, showing great emotion in the characters. Love the colours you use and the detail you always draw, showing the intricate design in the background leaves, the tears falling from the eyes of the characters and the detail in the tails and fingers. Brilliant! Suzanne

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the awesome review

Comment from Renate-Bertodi
superbly drawn and created as all your stuff is. I rather like the baggy knees of the man standing behind. Carefully designed intertwining as for instance the coned hat within the circle of the greaving 'thingy' mouse like creature. The symbolic sword which is the length of a man's legs. The jungle like leaves providing the background in the one colour not in the action itself. Is the nearby bird crying?

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Yep.. thanks for the great review

reply by Renate-Bertodi on 12-Dec-2018

sorry, typo Grieving.. can't imagine what gets into me when I am typing.

Comment from GaliaG
Amazing draw, I do not know if I should laugh or cry

excellent story telling, composition and presentation

good use of colors and excellent technique

thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

It's tear scene on this one. Thanks for the great review

Comment from jgrace
Very nice drawing with nice vivid colors used to accentuate the scene. Good choice of colors. The textural quality of the composition is great. Very well laid out. Balance between light and dark is excellent. Very striking.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Melancholic image.

Excellent choice of subject.
Compact framing.
Was this grossly cropped?

Creative concept. Innovative approach. Imaginative presentation.

Fantabulous color contrast!

Great story telling factor.
Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

No and on purpose.. during the video this will appear for only for a few seconds. So the POV has to be tight for the viewer to instantly understand the storyline in those few seconds..wink. thanks for the great review

Comment from alaskapat
This is super cute, because of the subjects and the way you have created them, you have managed to show the powerful emotion in the red bird with the warrior helmet and the mouse in the armor too, I see a human with a sword standing behind them. This is as usual well drawn with amazing detail throughout, I can see the time and thought you have applied here. Very well created great storytelling! Well presented!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the awesome review

Comment from mamamary
It looks like the bad guy Is a person. Mouse seem so cute in stories and video, but not so nice when they are in your house. I feel the emotion coming from your drawing. The redbird seems to feel it the most. Great attention to detail and your blending, as always, is expert!!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the great review

reply by mamamary on 13-Dec-2018

You are more than welcome.

reply by mamamary on 13-Dec-2018

You are more than welcome.

Comment from Malmax
Even though its not part of your recent working video its
a beautiful piece of wonderful art. The colors are great and eye-catching and the artistry is wonderful as usual. Can't wait to listen to the song accompanying this one. I'm sure its amazing!
Malmax

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the awesome review

reply by Malmax on 11-Dec-2018

My pleasure

Comment from Susan F. M. T.
Mark,
A sad scene you have depicted here of a brave Mouse Hero lying dying in the paws of his fellow mouse soldier while another Mouse stands Guard & the Cardinal Bird give his blessing??? Created in you very active imagination with Very skilful draftsmanship, beautiful choice, blending & application of your colours in bringing this tragic scene to like.
Susan

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018

Thanks for the great review