Reviews from

Temporary Home Finale

for music video

42 total reviews 
Comment from suzannethompson2


Great finale for your music video and excellent storytelling ability. I love all the detail you put in these cartoons - the expressions on the faces and the colours you use are excellent. Thank you for sharing your great talent with us. Suzanne

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from David Ruhl


A great piece for the finale of your video (which I liked very much!). A lot of impressive detail in the background features, as always. I see this as a scene that ties together some of the previous images and concludes this wonderful story. Well done!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from dalebraatz


This is out standing, love the story telling, very nice colors and details and depth you have created here,
A pleasure to look at, thank you for sharing, dale

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the awesome review
reply by dalebraatz on 09-Jan-2019
    Your welcome
Comment from Dick Lee Shia


Meticulous attention to details.
Fine features & textures.
Great story telling factor.
An interesting initial impact.

Harmonious colors.
Diminishing perspective. Vanishing viewpoint.

Selective color rendition.
Creative concept. Innovative approach. Imaginative presentation.

Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Artistic Chick


I'm glad I had an extra star to give you. When someone can create something that brings emotion to others, as this did for me, that is what I call true talent. Whether capturing a shot thru a camera lens, putting brush to canvas, sharpies to cardstock. If I can look at someone else's creation and audibly say, "aaahh", or fight back tears as this did to me, then I could never say enough or give enough stars. Thank you so much for...making me teary eyed. And for capturing the story.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the awesome review
Comment from alaskapat


Wow ! And I have to say WOW again! This is the perfect finale to your amazing video! Perfect song to accompany the artworks that tell the story, this made me cry! This finale is so very well rendered with the main characters that we have come to know one piece at a time! This is amazing, you are so very talented ! What a great accomplishment this is ! Thank you so very much ! I feel privileged for the opportunity to have watched this as a work in progress and now to see it completed !

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the awesome review
Comment from jgrace


Another great drawing for your video. The positioning of the subjects is well drawn and the message is clear. I watched your video. The song is one of my favorites and I enjoyed viewing your illustrations along with it. Awesome.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the awesome review
Comment from Envision


Nice job for an ending to the story! I like how the characters and the shadows leading to the heart are in color while the rest of the scene is mainly black and white. All the pieces fell into place perfectly in the video. Congratulations, nice job!

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from cleo85


I have already seen the video. This drawing is the perfect Final for it, because it shows the leading characters and also symbolically all the temporary homes. It shows the hard times and the good times as well. Seen as single, this drawing is well composed and intriguing, but at the end of the video it is breathtaking.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanks for the awesome review
reply by cleo85 on 10-Jan-2019
    You're very welcome :o)
Comment from John Kotalac


This was my first time watching you awesome video man. It was inspirational and a little sad at the same time. And the songs words worked great. We are all just living in this temporary place. I am always amazed by your art. The way you shade and detail is unbelievable. Especially when it is done with a permanent marker. Thanks for sharing that, can't wait to see more. John

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Took me a half century working with these pens to finally get it right...lol.. thanks for the great review