Birth Of Our Galaxy
In the Beginning23 total reviews
Comment from David Ruhl
Wow Steve! The photo is very good, but 10-Stars for the poem! A great message and story all wrapped into one. Just one correction though - I think you meant to use "since" instead of "sense". Now, with you and Lucas, I not only look forward to your next art/photo, I'm anxious to read your poems too!
Dave
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Wow Steve! The photo is very good, but 10-Stars for the poem! A great message and story all wrapped into one. Just one correction though - I think you meant to use "since" instead of "sense". Now, with you and Lucas, I not only look forward to your next art/photo, I'm anxious to read your poems too!
Dave
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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OMG! David you are SO right. I used the entirely wrong word. I would ordinarily be upset but as this is becoming more common along with not being to remember anything, I guess I will have to Depend upon You to check my spelling in future poems. What a relief Knowing that it is now Your Responsibility to be my Wordsmith. LOL. Thanks David. Good catch. No one else caught it....Hmmmm ~ Steve
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haha! Well, I am retiring in a few months so I guess I can handle a little more responsibility. Besides, I am a self-appointed member of the Internet Word Police! ;)
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Ah. A card carrying member of the Spelling/Sense/Since Gestapo. Great. You are Sooo needed.
I retired a little while ago and my mission is to give people like you a Sense/Since of Purpose. Glad to help. That is why I am here David ; )
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Lucky you - I still have 5 more months. 48 years of working is enough...
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Tell me about it. Retired Army. Then the VA as a Therapist. Time for a Break in the action. Hang in there. It is worth it.
Comment from adriansart
Steve this is very clever and very well done and taken!
Love the idea, love the black outer space idea with the highlighted water acting as stars and with the warmness of the center light sourse again acting as the sun it all works perfectly for me! I would give a 6 if I had one!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Steve this is very clever and very well done and taken!
Love the idea, love the black outer space idea with the highlighted water acting as stars and with the warmness of the center light sourse again acting as the sun it all works perfectly for me! I would give a 6 if I had one!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hey thanks Adrian. Appreciate your comments. No need for a six. Your thoughts are good enough ~ Steve
Comment from ArtistCharles
Very nice abstract created here by light reflecting in water. Good movement and shapes. It does have a "universe" feeling to it. Well seen and captured.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Very nice abstract created here by light reflecting in water. Good movement and shapes. It does have a "universe" feeling to it. Well seen and captured.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you Charles for your review and commentary. Very much appreciated ~ Steve
Comment from Donna Ruiz
A great entry for this contest. I looks at it and find myself wondering exactly what it is. The title is perfect. Nice post-processing work to create a nice abstract image. Best of luck, Steve.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A great entry for this contest. I looks at it and find myself wondering exactly what it is. The title is perfect. Nice post-processing work to create a nice abstract image. Best of luck, Steve.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much Donna. I really appreciate your thoughts and comments ~ Steve
Comment from nikman
A very good entry into the competition posted here! Your enjoyable image certainly does project a good sense of the astronomical. The dispersing dots/bubbles seem to be suggesting that they are expanding from a central position. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A very good entry into the competition posted here! Your enjoyable image certainly does project a good sense of the astronomical. The dispersing dots/bubbles seem to be suggesting that they are expanding from a central position. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thanks a lot Nik. I always appreciate your comments and review ~ Steve
Comment from Kelly Kiley
Wow!! The picture is awesome!! Love the stars!!! Your title fits perfectly!! When I read your writeup.. It blew my mind!! Way kool!! It sums everything up Soo well!! Love it!! You have a wonderful talent!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Wow!! The picture is awesome!! Love the stars!!! Your title fits perfectly!! When I read your writeup.. It blew my mind!! Way kool!! It sums everything up Soo well!! Love it!! You have a wonderful talent!!!!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much Kelly. I am glad you liked this abstract. I appreciate your thoughts and comments ~ Steve
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Your very welcome!!
Comment from MKFlood
very cool approach. it does give an illusion of space. the angle of the shot of the downward view of water on ground with light reflection is great. the capture of the light is great. the clarity is great. the image is balanced and eye appealing to the viewer. good eye and great job overall.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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very cool approach. it does give an illusion of space. the angle of the shot of the downward view of water on ground with light reflection is great. the capture of the light is great. the clarity is great. the image is balanced and eye appealing to the viewer. good eye and great job overall.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your detailed review.
Comment from avmurray
I have no idea how a birth of a galaxy would look like, but when I see your photo, I believe it would be exactly like you have imagined it. This is of course also a great looking abstract with very fine textures, and I like the strong contrast between dark and light.
Looking into your universe is indeed a pleasure, and I thing this mixed media photo in all its simplicity has a strong visual effect.
The format and framing is perfect and the burst of light has got a perfect placement to draw the viewer in. I think this is an original and great looking abstract with a very good editing, and I wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I have no idea how a birth of a galaxy would look like, but when I see your photo, I believe it would be exactly like you have imagined it. This is of course also a great looking abstract with very fine textures, and I like the strong contrast between dark and light.
Looking into your universe is indeed a pleasure, and I thing this mixed media photo in all its simplicity has a strong visual effect.
The format and framing is perfect and the burst of light has got a perfect placement to draw the viewer in. I think this is an original and great looking abstract with a very good editing, and I wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much Annie. Your detailed and artistic reviews are always most appreciated ~ Steve
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You are more than welcome Steve.
Comment from helvi2
Hi Steve, this does look like the birth of a galaxy. You did a beautiful job of making everything seemingly coming together. You can fee the rotation begin. Love how your own imagination works with you to see things beginning to form, If I was looking into the heavens I can picture myself seeing this. Very nice perception on what you'd think you see. Definitely work that deserves six stars!!! :o) Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hi Steve, this does look like the birth of a galaxy. You did a beautiful job of making everything seemingly coming together. You can fee the rotation begin. Love how your own imagination works with you to see things beginning to form, If I was looking into the heavens I can picture myself seeing this. Very nice perception on what you'd think you see. Definitely work that deserves six stars!!! :o) Nancy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Wow. Than k you so much Nancy. I really appreciate your wonderful review and Grand rating. Very encouraging ~ Steve
Comment from Linda Wetzel
This image has such depth and and creates a sense of the vastness of the universe. The golden light is symbolic of the Creator and the Big Bang that created all that is. The filters you used created a superb image.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This image has such depth and and creates a sense of the vastness of the universe. The golden light is symbolic of the Creator and the Big Bang that created all that is. The filters you used created a superb image.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much Linda for your artistic review and commentary. Very much appreciated Linda ~ Steve
