Comment from michiganmike
Can't wait for this one to be done so I can follow the story a little better. You know how it is with us "old timers". A fine image with great colors.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

yeah im spring chicken in my mind . wink.. lol.. thakks for the great review.

Comment from Susan F. M. T.
Mark,
A beautiful picture of the Space Shuttle heading off towards the distant planet the Flowernaut with a smile on his face to be on the journey into the future after leaving Jupiter. Created by your artist's eye for composition very skilful draftsmanship, beautiful choice blending & application of your colours in bringing this scene to life.. looking forward to seeing the resulting Video!
Susan

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

thanks for the great review

Comment from Kurt Fondriest
Your Technique is very well executed. Is the figure on Jupiter a reflection of yourself? I don't know if I would have made it the same size as the planet that the space shuttle is moving towards. For me it distracts the composition. If the figure is you I think it could be smaller. Maybe find a way to still incorporate it into the design.

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

of course Kurt you wouldnt have a clue.. this is just a scene from the current music video that im doing for songwriter Bryan Tayior. since this scene is over halfway thru how would you know if you didn't follow it? hmmm? i disagree on your opinion about the character window.. which of course you have no clue what is going on and i dont hold against ya.. im not an artist who is trying to express my art to the world . im just an old cartoonist and illustrator who tells stories for writers and myseif as well. i thank ya for time and somewhat review. (thumbs up)

Comment from Brendaartwork18
Good initial impact.

Fine drawing and colouring of spaceman and craft.

The two planets work well with your colour scheme.

I like the dark side with the many variations on the opposite side.

A good illustration I am sure for your project.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

thanks for the great review

Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
Quite a feel good sharpie painting bro! The primary colours have been used effectively.So also the shapes and the spacing to create space. Interesting viewing experience! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

thanks bro for the great review

Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Minimalist creation.
Great story telling factor. Harmonious colors. Fine features & smooth textures.
Diminishing perspective gives a better depth....
Nice letterbox framing.

Thanks for sharing...

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

thanks for the great review

Comment from David Ruhl
Great job on the planet Jupiter, moon Io, and the astronaut! Can't wait to see the finished video. I'm sure it will be amazing like the rest.

Dave

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

thanks for the great review

Comment from Renate-Bertodi
you are so difficult to review as all you do is so professional and well turned out yet simple in design and colour. So Lo is our new figure to look out for?

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

Thanks for the awesome review

Comment from Lorafina
Can't wait! I thought that rocket ship was going towards the thing on the left. Now where is it going?I remember in the last one thinking the rocket ship was going to go right into that red thing on the left. Maybe it had to take a sharp turn to get away. I'm really looking forward to the completion of the video! Is going to be very cool I'm positive!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

well Jupiter is a big gassy planet but NASA has looked at Io for possible landing in the future..after Mars of course. oh btw congrats on the win!(thumbs up) you deserve it dear..it was well earned..oh btw i dont recall..did you send in your image for the FAN sites video that im gonna be doing? if you didnt holler at me and ill give ya the info..thanks for the great review.

reply by Lorafina on 17-Aug-2019

Thank you so much! And yes, please send info! :-).

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

Fellow FAN member;

Tom (Sites Administrator) is allowing me to create a music video to advertise all 3 FAN sites(music/art/story) and its members. The music is gonna be Queen's "We Will Rock You" which will be streamed on Youtube.com. If you wish to join us to be in it, all you need to do is send me an image that you feel represents you to my email. (1mkflood@gmail.com). The image can be anything..photo..drawing..anything. One member sent me the poster of Bruce Lee's "Enter the Dragon"..lol. Now the deadline is Halloween. The goal is to be completed by Thanksgiving and streamed before December 2019. All this can be verified by Tom. So let's get our name out there for the world to see us!! Hope you join us!

Thanks,

MKFlood

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

that was the email i sent out to the music side..oh yeah..help spread the word too..since this is my project i get to do the advertisement as well..lol

Comment from Regina E.H-Ariel
Love it - the happy face makes it all after the bugs - I love the color blend and the entire story in this illustration
as always fantastic detail work , harmonious composition , well balanced in dark and light and for sure excellent use of space - well done

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019

thanks Regina for the great review.

reply by Regina E.H-Ariel on 17-Aug-2019

Always welcome