It looks like a beautiful cathedral, the center above the alter is blown out, causing a loss of detail , the composition lacks flow and balance , focus is okay, I like the people bringing life to this scene. I appreciate your effort but this doesn't work for me, I'm sorry.
wow!! what a wonderful entry in this contest!!! this is a beautiful place.. look at all the marble work!!! .. never got a chance it see it in person.. love seeing it in your pictures!!! best of luck in this contest!!!!