Comment from Daphne Oberon
Hmmm second one perfect because the size of the figures is good. In the first one, I prefer dispensing with the outer frame altogether and only showing the inner frame and a piece of squared off stage?? It is because the puppets and detail are too small.... Also I like the idea of starting with a close up and then moving back for the excellent, super second one....

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019

It was difficult photo. They are both sample ideas and are much clearer in the real. My hubby scanned them and sent them to me by WhatsApp. I am stuck in Portugal for anither 2 weeks so working on cafe stuff by remote control . I do agree the 2nd is better. I think the puppets need to be larger perhaps as you say they are too small,

Comment from Sange
Your photo of your artwork is a bit soft, but I do like the vintage style and colors.
I like the dancers in the spotlights.
You are works hard and I do hope they choose your work to be on their walls.
Nice work Brenda, but a sharper photo would help view it better.
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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019

Thanks Sandra. I am having much probs with camera work. These were scanned by my hubby in Germany and sent to me by WhatsApp in Portugal. I have been unexpectedly detained here :( working by remote control.

Comment from Neilnap773
Unfortunately the presentation is unclear as a result of the poor quality of the picture taken and I really would have liked to have seen the intricate detail in these two pieces,subsequently Ive had to mark down but the idea behind the presentation I perceive to be good

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019

Than you very much for reviewing and your fair comments, I appreciate. I am having camera problems and these were scanned by my hubby and sent to me by WhatsApp. Not the best for display work. :(