Comment from nikman
Looks like and sounds like you are very much mistaken! Your fine, off-centre composition does show a colour other than grey in the mouth, so if you are correct the capture is of something else. Exposure and sharpness are good. Nicely done!

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

many thanks again