That Twilight Zone Moment
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Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Nice scene, well composed and the colors are good. The eyes, even though to me are one to many, is a nice addition to the composition.
Be too many I think I would have had only one under the dark area under the TV stand.
Sometimes, moderation, restraint makes for a more effective feature. Fewer makes them more dramatic and have a greater impact.
Because in this case they override the TV image to quickly.
Thank you for allowing me to review your work, and my hope is my comments are useful and constructive.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Nice scene, well composed and the colors are good. The eyes, even though to me are one to many, is a nice addition to the composition.
Be too many I think I would have had only one under the dark area under the TV stand.
Sometimes, moderation, restraint makes for a more effective feature. Fewer makes them more dramatic and have a greater impact.
Because in this case they override the TV image to quickly.
Thank you for allowing me to review your work, and my hope is my comments are useful and constructive.
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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i agree about to many in a drawing. however, not this one..if you notice they are not out in the open and still has a clean effect in the drawing. for me to project a fearful paranoia 1 pair of eyes would not get it. artist choice i guess..wink. thanks for review.
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yes, it is always the artist choice.
take care.
as always you have yourself a great day creating.
cheers,
Lucien
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You too as well..I'm currently working on another entry..even if the committee doesn't vote on it, they will at least chuckle over it..wink
Comment from nikman
An attractive and amusing entry into the competition posted here! Who is Rod Sterling? There is certainly a lot for those eyes and my eyes to look at and absorb. Well created!
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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An attractive and amusing entry into the competition posted here! Who is Rod Sterling? There is certainly a lot for those eyes and my eyes to look at and absorb. Well created!
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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he is the american version of "Alfred Hitchcock"..creator and host of "Twilight Zone"..google it..wink. thanks for the great review.,
Comment from Darth Chelios
This deserves six stars but I'm fresh out.
I love your work of art!
You're so imaginative!
You're a shoe-in for this contest! I never heard the expression "the eyes have it" until my English mother, whom woke from an induced coma. She has short term memory loss and we never heard her say that before. She said it a lot in the hospital. My dad and I were so confused. We didn't know what it meant.
Months later she told us what it meant. I absolutely love your portrayal of the contest topic. I really dig the story too <3
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reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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This deserves six stars but I'm fresh out.
I love your work of art!
You're so imaginative!
You're a shoe-in for this contest! I never heard the expression "the eyes have it" until my English mother, whom woke from an induced coma. She has short term memory loss and we never heard her say that before. She said it a lot in the hospital. My dad and I were so confused. We didn't know what it meant.
Months later she told us what it meant. I absolutely love your portrayal of the contest topic. I really dig the story too <3
[6 Stars]
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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thanks for the great review.
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You;re welcome :-D