Pond water
Oils on canvas11 total reviews
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
James,
I think you got the wet look correct.However, other aspects seem off to me. The angles of her body, her breast, her head her, butt all seems like they are going in opposite directions. For me that aspect just seems wrong. As does her hairs framing her face on the right.
On the upside the flesh tones are okay, and she looks unhappy, maybe its what she is holding and planning on releasing.
I believe you can do better, it t looks rushed.
Thank you for allowing me to comment on your photo.
Have a nice weekend,
Cheers,
Lucien
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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James,
I think you got the wet look correct.However, other aspects seem off to me. The angles of her body, her breast, her head her, butt all seems like they are going in opposite directions. For me that aspect just seems wrong. As does her hairs framing her face on the right.
On the upside the flesh tones are okay, and she looks unhappy, maybe its what she is holding and planning on releasing.
I believe you can do better, it t looks rushed.
Thank you for allowing me to comment on your photo.
Have a nice weekend,
Cheers,
Lucien
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very much Lucien she was turned in a weird angle the whole purpose of this one was the wrong look I may revisit this one in future to clean it up once again thank you
Comment from MKFlood
darn..ran out of 6's..another cool one. the facial is excellent. the body form and language is excellent. the shading is excellent. the blend of the colors is awesome. the creation is well balanced and very eye appealing to the viewer. another cool one #1(clapping)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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darn..ran out of 6's..another cool one. the facial is excellent. the body form and language is excellent. the shading is excellent. the blend of the colors is awesome. the creation is well balanced and very eye appealing to the viewer. another cool one #1(clapping)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very much number one resend me your email I?ll get our next collaboration to you if it will let me
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Comment from Laprap
Nice oil painting. The lady is well proportioned, good looking, and thinking of something good. Love the hat and light clothing. You mentioned a wet look. Great job. Laprap
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Nice oil painting. The lady is well proportioned, good looking, and thinking of something good. Love the hat and light clothing. You mentioned a wet look. Great job. Laprap
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Kevin Williams
Your experiment came out really well. It looks terrific. You achieved good results using the oils on canvas. I like the light and dark tones you have used to bring out the highlights and shadows.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Your experiment came out really well. It looks terrific. You achieved good results using the oils on canvas. I like the light and dark tones you have used to bring out the highlights and shadows.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so dry very much
Comment from Neilnap773
A nice composition my friend,particularly like your choice of palette and the tones that you have created through your inclusion of shadow which is particularly evident in the softness of your creases in the womans blouse.The backdrop being dark has assisted in the enhancement of your subject matter
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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A nice composition my friend,particularly like your choice of palette and the tones that you have created through your inclusion of shadow which is particularly evident in the softness of your creases in the womans blouse.The backdrop being dark has assisted in the enhancement of your subject matter
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from nikman
A rather strange title for a portrait painting? Somehow she looks somewhat unhappy for some reason? Looks like your experiment has worked out pretty well indeed. You seem to have achieved the look and texture of wet clothes. Well created!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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A rather strange title for a portrait painting? Somehow she looks somewhat unhappy for some reason? Looks like your experiment has worked out pretty well indeed. You seem to have achieved the look and texture of wet clothes. Well created!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Seductive creation without being totally naked...
Nude but not nasty.....
Bold but not obscene.....
Erotic but not vulgar.....
The chiaroscuro illumination effect pops out the subject from the frame.
Smooth skin fone.
Palpable peach silky Texture...
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Seductive creation without being totally naked...
Nude but not nasty.....
Bold but not obscene.....
Erotic but not vulgar.....
The chiaroscuro illumination effect pops out the subject from the frame.
Smooth skin fone.
Palpable peach silky Texture...
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from JirinaInspire
So soft and beautiful, well framed and so nice to view. Details and the way she moves is splendid. The presentation and overall image is superb!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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So soft and beautiful, well framed and so nice to view. Details and the way she moves is splendid. The presentation and overall image is superb!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Halle Sherlock
Beautifully done. The shirt flowing off her body is beautiful. The use of colors go beautiful. I love how you captured the movement of her body in the photo.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Beautifully done. The shirt flowing off her body is beautiful. The use of colors go beautiful. I love how you captured the movement of her body in the photo.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much
Comment from Sean T Phelan
Cool,James!
It's interesting,pleasantly sexy.and,most of all,it's a whole lot of fun to look at!
A really 'Good Show' of a painting,buddy! : )
~Sean
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Cool,James!
It's interesting,pleasantly sexy.and,most of all,it's a whole lot of fun to look at!
A really 'Good Show' of a painting,buddy! : )
~Sean
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very very much sean
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You're very welcome,James!