Comment from MKFlood
yeah i know its tough for you artist to work with my office medium. That's why y'all throw in every other medium to make it work. i reckon that's how they teach y'all in art school..i never had any classes so im assuming they teach yall in art school dont use sharpie or bic unless you use other mediums..not upset just fascinated that over the years the art community would shun sharpie and bic pens. so folks would try to be different and throw all the art medium in with this office medium. its just an observation. the details is good. the body form and language is good. the shading is good. the depth is good. the creation is balanced and eye appealing to the viewer. creative and good job overall.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020

Hey there I am 75 and never been to art school lol. My pen work goes along too but these days so much variety of pens, office pens, this was all pens including the watercolour and pastel, I will never be as good as you with them but they are so versitile and its you and your work that started me experimenting. I love them. Thank you very much for your reviewing and much appreciating your comments.

Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
Interesting take on the comic strip action girl. The body language of the character makes it an interesting viewing. But the face and other features may require some sharpening and clarity. Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020

Thank you. Yes I had problems with the big hand and face but ran out of time for the comp. Will work at it asap