Rough Seas Ahead
for contest9 total reviews
Comment from Lucien van Oosten
This is good but unfortunately it missed on one rule, needing to be black ink.
The other this is that there should have been some addition lines, shapes in the boat and in the lighting.
The sky and ocean are exactly what a Zentangle should be in my estimation. In the repeating shapes that creates a great visual flow there. I might have made the rain a little more interesting by having them evolve into droplets, like paisley like patterns,& then turning into the ocean, know what I mean?
I will not take off for the color used, but I will take off for the lack of shapes, textures in the boats hull and lighting bolts.
A good first attempt. I hope you enjoyed doing the drawing using this technique.
Thank you for entering and then allowing me to comment on your entry.
Have a good day, cheer!
Be safe.
Lucien
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
     |
This is good but unfortunately it missed on one rule, needing to be black ink.
The other this is that there should have been some addition lines, shapes in the boat and in the lighting.
The sky and ocean are exactly what a Zentangle should be in my estimation. In the repeating shapes that creates a great visual flow there. I might have made the rain a little more interesting by having them evolve into droplets, like paisley like patterns,& then turning into the ocean, know what I mean?
I will not take off for the color used, but I will take off for the lack of shapes, textures in the boats hull and lighting bolts.
A good first attempt. I hope you enjoyed doing the drawing using this technique.
Thank you for entering and then allowing me to comment on your entry.
Have a good day, cheer!
Be safe.
Lucien
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
-
thats all i ask for ..thanks for the review..dont worry im not disappointed..kinda expected it really..after all this is only a doodle..thanks for your time.(thumbs up)
-
just wanted to give you ideas on how it could be better and more in line with the idea behind the Zentangle idea, for a piece of art.
not an F.
Cheers,
Lucien
-
well maybe a D but in my mind i give myself an F..its ok..that means to improve myself..thats all..(thumbs up)
Comment from nikman
A pretty good looking entry into the competition posted here! Your fine and traditional composition shows us that the conditions are pretty rough out there! Not sure that I understand your sky? Otherwise nicely drawn!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
|
A pretty good looking entry into the competition posted here! Your fine and traditional composition shows us that the conditions are pretty rough out there! Not sure that I understand your sky? Otherwise nicely drawn!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
-
oh its for this doodle contest..not my usual stuff...this is more like back when i was kid doing something like this. straight ballpoint pen only..thanks for the good review.
Comment from FBI GUY
You doodle well. I too had to look up the word when I first encountered some of his work. I am not an artist but I might give this a try just for fun. Your doodling actually has some clarity and substance. Rough ride indeed but totally cool.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
|
You doodle well. I too had to look up the word when I first encountered some of his work. I am not an artist but I might give this a try just for fun. Your doodling actually has some clarity and substance. Rough ride indeed but totally cool.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
-
give it a try..a doodle is a doodle that anyone can do..wink..thanks for the great review.
Comment from Brendaartwork18
Brilliant 2 hour doodle. It's got character this and a story. So why not a story. I looked it up too. Looks more like patterns, very intricate patterns. Intensive concentration to achieve some of them but this is fresh. It has balance and it is intricate. Well done you.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
 |
Brilliant 2 hour doodle. It's got character this and a story. So why not a story. I looked it up too. Looks more like patterns, very intricate patterns. Intensive concentration to achieve some of them but this is fresh. It has balance and it is intricate. Well done you.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
-
Thanks Brenda for the awesome review
-
Your welcome
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
Wow! This is a very creative work from a very creative sharpie artist specializing in frisky flowers! I love it. So much of detail and careful planning has gone into it and I don't thnk you should call it a doodle. Great composition!Well done! Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
|
Wow! This is a very creative work from a very creative sharpie artist specializing in frisky flowers! I love it. So much of detail and careful planning has gone into it and I don't thnk you should call it a doodle. Great composition!Well done! Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
-
Thanks bro for the great review
Comment from Artistsushma
Beautiful pattern.....you have created a nice scenery...I like the waves in the water....the dense clouds and lightening add to your story...the rough sea and the boat are beautifully done.... overall very impressive....good luck for the contest
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
|
Beautiful pattern.....you have created a nice scenery...I like the waves in the water....the dense clouds and lightening add to your story...the rough sea and the boat are beautifully done.... overall very impressive....good luck for the contest
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
-
Thanks for the great review
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Love the story of the creation of this piece. It has a symmetry to it that is interesting. Just goes to show an artist can create without a lot of equipment. Sometimes basic is best anyway. I like the sails on the ship, that caught my attention right away. Good job. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
|
Love the story of the creation of this piece. It has a symmetry to it that is interesting. Just goes to show an artist can create without a lot of equipment. Sometimes basic is best anyway. I like the sails on the ship, that caught my attention right away. Good job. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
-
Thanks for the great review
Comment from Way West
I am not a drawing artist but I can really see the the "fun" in your rendering. Such great detail and simplicity of subject makes this an enjoyable piece to look at. I imagine that it was great fun to do! Very nice.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
|
I am not a drawing artist but I can really see the the "fun" in your rendering. Such great detail and simplicity of subject makes this an enjoyable piece to look at. I imagine that it was great fun to do! Very nice.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
-
oh this is 2 hours doodling..hadnt done that since a kid..it was fun to go down memory lane but ill stick with my sharpies and bic pens.wink..thanks for the good review. (thumbs up)
Comment from OpenroadFootprint
I am yet to try this myself (unknown person :D ) but looking forward to giving it a go too. An interesting contest of which I wish you well. Also love that Lucien has created something different for us all to try.
I love what you have created here! I actually really like the use of the pink too. But the 'moving ocean' looks great, the curls representing the sky, really interestingly done. And really, really like it. :)
If you enjoyed the process, keep doing more! A wonderful style. :)
What a way to pass a 'waiting' time. ;)
Keep creating,
Ann, OpenroadFootprint
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
|
I am yet to try this myself (unknown person :D ) but looking forward to giving it a go too. An interesting contest of which I wish you well. Also love that Lucien has created something different for us all to try.
I love what you have created here! I actually really like the use of the pink too. But the 'moving ocean' looks great, the curls representing the sky, really interestingly done. And really, really like it. :)
If you enjoyed the process, keep doing more! A wonderful style. :)
What a way to pass a 'waiting' time. ;)
Keep creating,
Ann, OpenroadFootprint
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
-
oh darling i did things like this when i was a kid..thats how i knew about doodling..however, not many will work strictly with sharpie and bic pens like i do..wink..come join us! thanks for the great review.