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Girls Just Want To Have Fun!

cartoon

27 total reviews 
Comment from Renate-Bertodi


some oddly boyish girls. Yes when they can get away from being watched- with the usual, girls don't behave that way. Hence dressing girls prettily, I think is all part of the same plan. A males perspective. Beautilly presented as always, care taken with the girly clothes, a bow, kilt and denim bib and braces /which I wore for many years./ and lovely toning colours.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    That's Bull! Tell that to my 3 daughters. Besides blues jeans and a plaid dress is not considered to dressed up in America. They always jumped on the bed at that age. Which I would holler to stop it. Your way of thinking is being stereotype. Maybe because of your horrible experience in earlier life that made think that way. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Alisons9


This is really cute. I like your details in the clothing. The color choices are very nice. I think that the face of the girls are a little too doll like. If you added some detail and values, it would really increase the depth of the work. Nice job.

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 Comment Written 15-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
    Well Alison first let me welcome you to FAR since your new here...2nd in this CARTOON I do disagree but your review is only an opinion and I'll respect that..it's like beauty is in the eyes of the beholder..besides this is 4year old..what you expect? A wrinkled 4 year old??..lol .oh that's rich but thanks for YOUR opinion and review..lol
Comment from DRAGONdog


A very fitting title for this scene; it looks like a lot of fun! The mid jump poses for both girls look so fluid - you've captured such a great moment in time to be a kid! It's amazing to think you did all this with sharpies and pens! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
    half century now working with this medium..not bad for a guy who never had a art class in his life huh? wink. thanks for the great review
Comment from Jeremiah1


I think you have shown an excellent depiction of young child hood and creativaty I am rather impressed that you able show what it means to be a kid again

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Browncat


These little girls look like my granddaughters! I like the motion in the photo, and the one girl's face is especially appealing. Good colors and overall composition.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    well it pleases me you like the face. my memory of my girls doing this. however, these girls are made up by me. thanks for the great review.
Comment from michiganmike


Even us old men like a little bit of fun now and then. A very nicely composed drawing that captures the thrill of bouncing on a bed very well.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    thanks for the great review.
Comment from Jewell McChesney


This is a darling depiction of two children having a good time jumping on the bed.
What medium do you use to create such clear images?
Very nice. ð???

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Sharpie and Bic pens..thanks for the great review
Comment from mamamary


Why is it that kids always want to do things the most that can hurt them? "Quit jumping on the bed! You're going to get hurt!" The girls seem to be enjoying themselves. The girl in blue is too close to the side of the bed. Very realistic and great storytelling.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    Raised 3 girls I know..it only takes a minute for them to get into things..wink..thanks for the good review
reply by mamamary on 03-Nov-2020
    Boys are about the same.
Comment from Susan F. M. T.


Mark,
Your picture brought me right back to the age when I too could bounce upon my bead treating it like a Trampoline until a voice from below put paid to my activities! Created by your artist's eye for composition & your gifted ability to convey on your canvas whet you see in your mind's eye. Very skilful draftsmanship, beautiful choice blending & application of your colours in bringing this scene to life.
Susan

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    Thanks for the great review
Comment from Highfive


Nice uses of colors to created to two pleasant children bouncing on their bed, seemingly having the time of their life. Very nice animated feel in the tone of their skin and clothes. I really like the pea green and all the light shadows creating nice contrast throughout the image area. Excellent presentation and clarity. Thanks

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    thanks for the awesome review.