Comment from Artistsushma
very nice piece of drawing...i like the carefree nature of this work....children are looking adorable enjoying their watermelons....the play of light and shadows is good....nice composition....good luck for the contest....

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanks so much for your very kind review!

Comment from Lauryl Dawn
This is an adorable drawing. I love the expressions you rendered, especially one of the little girl. It does seem a little tonal; I wish there were darker shades and lighter highlights. A wider range of the value scale would really add dimension. Overall, the proportions and idea is fantastic!! I wish you the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review.