Comment from
DeansterZ
Nice arrangement and good contrast with the dark background. One major issue is the lack of focus. All of the subjects are blurry and lacking good details.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
Thank you for your review. I note your comments and appreciate feedback. I am rearranging this group for better focus. My devices are showing clear images that are sea washed. Perhaps my new arrangement will be more crisp. I do appreciate Your critique.
Comment from
alaskapat
This is an interesting piece, I like the natural items you have placed onto the black background giving it the look of a cosmos setting.
I feel that the top shell should have been placed down to allow a bit more space above it, the two shells in lower left moved forward just a bit .
I would play with the arrangement and try shooting in natural light. I appreciate the opportunity to view this and find it to be very interesting.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2021
Thank you Pat, point taken to do a rearrangement more tight as you suggest.