A Rainy Adventure
for contest18 total reviews
Comment from Brendaartwork18
Why not... plenty of lines here I cannot denigh but my line entries always escape into oblivion too but at least we try. Its a galleon on the high seas with cliffs eitger side and reaini g landing on the wave. Fanrastic imagination. Well put together, and much pacience.. good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Why not... plenty of lines here I cannot denigh but my line entries always escape into oblivion too but at least we try. Its a galleon on the high seas with cliffs eitger side and reaini g landing on the wave. Fanrastic imagination. Well put together, and much pacience.. good luck.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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thanks Brenda for the great review.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
I have come to recognize your art even if I don't see your name alongside it. This is interesting but you know how I am, I am a person who loves color and lots of it so this isn't really my cup of tea, but nevertheless this is a decent drawing. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I have come to recognize your art even if I don't see your name alongside it. This is interesting but you know how I am, I am a person who loves color and lots of it so this isn't really my cup of tea, but nevertheless this is a decent drawing. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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look at the contest topic..it pains my soul not to add color but this is line art so i had to bite the bullet and do it like this..wink. thanks for the good review.
Comment from Way West
I think this is a spectacular entry for the line art contest! The many lines and textures are interesting, almost visually challenging as you take in the slanting rain, curling clouds and choppy waves surrounding the brave boat! This shows fine talent and skill and hey, don't ever stop believing in your self!! Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I think this is a spectacular entry for the line art contest! The many lines and textures are interesting, almost visually challenging as you take in the slanting rain, curling clouds and choppy waves surrounding the brave boat! This shows fine talent and skill and hey, don't ever stop believing in your self!! Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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if i didnt keep on believing i wouldnt keep trying..i was just pissing and moaning on the artist notes..i have the belief but the committee has to agree with me for that to happen. so here it is over a decade and im still trying..wink wink..lol. thanks for the great review.
Comment from alaskapat
A rainy adventure indeed! I can see the time this took and the patience too! The ship right in the center of a storm , it's poring down rain!
Well created to tell this wet story. Well arranged and presented! Best wishes to you in this contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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A rainy adventure indeed! I can see the time this took and the patience too! The ship right in the center of a storm , it's poring down rain!
Well created to tell this wet story. Well arranged and presented! Best wishes to you in this contest!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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thanks Pat for the great review
Comment from Glena Jessee-King
Wonderful commercial work. I'm not familiar with a Sharpie razor's work. Is it used similarly like one would scratch out the piece artistically? If so, or not so, you did excellent detailed work. So amazing. I actually googled the tools and saw Sharpie pen advertisement after advertisement. But I enjoy learning. I, too, can visualize your narrative. And, it does look like a ship slap dab in the middle of an adventure at sea, with water below and coming from above.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Wonderful commercial work. I'm not familiar with a Sharpie razor's work. Is it used similarly like one would scratch out the piece artistically? If so, or not so, you did excellent detailed work. So amazing. I actually googled the tools and saw Sharpie pen advertisement after advertisement. But I enjoy learning. I, too, can visualize your narrative. And, it does look like a ship slap dab in the middle of an adventure at sea, with water below and coming from above.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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sharpie razor pens are fine line ink markers that was introduced back (in 72 i think) by sharpie. they are a great tool for detail work as well as outline. drives me up the wall not using color but the contest calls for this. thanks for the great review.
Comment from jesuel
what a great line drawing the Flying Dutchman on the ocean the depth and perspective are great as well love how you rendered the rain with line beautiful work here
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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what a great line drawing the Flying Dutchman on the ocean the depth and perspective are great as well love how you rendered the rain with line beautiful work here
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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thanks #1 for the great review.
Comment from liseworks
Is this different for you to not have any colours in your art, as I have not seen any or reviewed a black and white from you before, This water is pretty choppy and this ship seems to be hanging in there pretty well, hope you have better luck in contest
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Is this different for you to not have any colours in your art, as I have not seen any or reviewed a black and white from you before, This water is pretty choppy and this ship seems to be hanging in there pretty well, hope you have better luck in contest
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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did a title search for "the concert" its for the black and white contest. thanks for the great review.
Comment from janicep1
I love your use of line to describe this scene. You have great details in your work that keeps they eye moving around. I love your sky with the curved marks evoking clouds. And your rain drops are amazing in their variation. Your ocean waves are very unique and I like the depth you get with their changing size. Your ship is a perfect focal point coming towards us. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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I love your use of line to describe this scene. You have great details in your work that keeps they eye moving around. I love your sky with the curved marks evoking clouds. And your rain drops are amazing in their variation. Your ocean waves are very unique and I like the depth you get with their changing size. Your ship is a perfect focal point coming towards us. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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yeah every year i would say to myself why bother with line art contest. i never seem to create that line drawing they want..oh well if this dont make it i just dont know what will..lol. thanks for the awesome review.
Comment from Michele Walsh Gorres
Very patterned; the artist is consistent with the repetition of shapes. I find that kind of mesmerizing, since it is not something I do in my work. I am not normally a cartoon aficionado, but this one holds my interest.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Very patterned; the artist is consistent with the repetition of shapes. I find that kind of mesmerizing, since it is not something I do in my work. I am not normally a cartoon aficionado, but this one holds my interest.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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ROFLMAO! oh yeah..a line art contest where you cant shade nor color..if your review is 3 1/2 stars..means works really sucks and need to throw it away and start over again...really? well thats ok..there is a very big difference from a artist and a cartoonist..artist can slap anything on the canvas and try to claim it as an expression..they could have the viewers twisting their head like a puppy dog trying to figure out the artist is doing..a cartoonist (good one) doesnt have to explain what they done and the viewer will always understand what is in the scene. at least you dont hear some cartoonist giving some corny statement like artist do that it was drawn for world peace or world hunger like artist do when they are primping in a gallery..wink wink. thanks for the very poor review. (sticking finger down my throat)..lol
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Thank you for the beat-down...I guess it was well deserved! This was my very first review ever, lol, and I'm afraid we agree on your outlook of Artists. It may be a rocky start but I think we will get along great in the future.
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No worries...i dont hold grudges..i just poke fun at em..wink .lol.
Comment from cleo85
This is an unusual drawing. The mix of zentangle sand line art is intriguing. Apparently the patterns below symbolize waves, while the diagonal lines in front of the ship are tremendous rain. The ship behind seemingly emerges from ancient history. Your attention to detail is impressive. The drawing is well composed and framed. The composition is balanced.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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This is an unusual drawing. The mix of zentangle sand line art is intriguing. Apparently the patterns below symbolize waves, while the diagonal lines in front of the ship are tremendous rain. The ship behind seemingly emerges from ancient history. Your attention to detail is impressive. The drawing is well composed and framed. The composition is balanced.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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i promise i will not color this in..im not getting screwed again..if i lose this time it wont because i post a color version later..that would have been nice to know before hand..lol..thanks cleo for the awesome review.
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You're very welcome! :o)