Face and Lace
Line and curve drawing of sister in high school.15 total reviews
Comment from blujdrawings
Great work and love tones, minimal
Tones gives a softness here which is good.
Eyes have life and really helps makes this drawing pop
Great work
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Great work and love tones, minimal
Tones gives a softness here which is good.
Eyes have life and really helps makes this drawing pop
Great work
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you again, blujdrawings. Thanks for reviewing. Believe this is the first two times you have reviewed. Anyway thanks so very much.
Comment from Monica Morrell
This is one of those drawings were less is more. Very well done. I like how you have shown her eyes glistening in a simple yet effective way. Good proportion and character,
A pleasure to view. A talent for sure.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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This is one of those drawings were less is more. Very well done. I like how you have shown her eyes glistening in a simple yet effective way. Good proportion and character,
A pleasure to view. A talent for sure.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you, artist Monica. I appreciate your fine descriptive comments and for reviewing.
Comment from Heather P
Great accuracy. I can tell you drew accurately from a photograph. I think using a variety of thicknesses of pens, such as a thinner pen to emphasize the delicacy of the lacy design and fineness of the hair, would really add interest to the drawing. Beautiful eyes.
Add more lines to portray much more shadow on the face and it will really pop out and look even more realistic.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Great accuracy. I can tell you drew accurately from a photograph. I think using a variety of thicknesses of pens, such as a thinner pen to emphasize the delicacy of the lacy design and fineness of the hair, would really add interest to the drawing. Beautiful eyes.
Add more lines to portray much more shadow on the face and it will really pop out and look even more realistic.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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I did not draw from a photograph except to repeat from the drawing I did years ago. I purposely just drew this plainly, simply as have other projects. Hope you reconsider this low rating. I've never gotten a rating this low. Thanks. I could do cross hatching, many types of lines, curves. I just did simple. Please see my muscles in portfolio. I may do some of your suggestions if I have enought days left in the contest. I was only trying to capture her likeness with lines and curves.
Comment from iPhone7
A very good entry for the Line Art Contest.
You have captured her likeness very well. The lines are clean showing good detail in the eyes and the lace.
Nice work and all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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A very good entry for the Line Art Contest.
You have captured her likeness very well. The lines are clean showing good detail in the eyes and the lace.
Nice work and all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, artist friend. Appreciate your encouraging review, especially at this time.
Comment from MKFlood
Nice sketch. The facial expression is great. The details is great. The depth is great. The line shading is great. The presentation is balance and eye appealing to the viewer. Creative approach and great job overall.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Nice sketch. The facial expression is great. The details is great. The depth is great. The line shading is great. The presentation is balance and eye appealing to the viewer. Creative approach and great job overall.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you, artist friend MKFlood. Your reviews and support mean so much. Thought this line and curve drawing of my sister in her senior high school would be fine to enter into that contest.
Comment from jesuel
what a great line drawing the design is both creative and unique and being a line drawing their is no shading but hints at where shadows should be fine work here
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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what a great line drawing the design is both creative and unique and being a line drawing their is no shading but hints at where shadows should be fine work here
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you kind artist friend. Means so much coming from such a skilled artist. Thanks again.
Comment from Ray Gordon
Close likeness of you, she being your sister, jaw line, smile, eyes. Very nice. The white that you used on the facial features, hair and lace worked fine and made nice hi-lites on the eyes and lids. Well framed and balanced.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Close likeness of you, she being your sister, jaw line, smile, eyes. Very nice. The white that you used on the facial features, hair and lace worked fine and made nice hi-lites on the eyes and lids. Well framed and balanced.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you kindly, artist friend Ray. We are a year and seven months apart and I love her dearly.
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You are welcome. Ray G.
Comment from alaskapat
Very nice line drawing of your sister in high school. She is a pretty young woman .
Well shaped face , good show of her facial structure , nice facial features. She comes to life with your creation of her beautiful eyes!
Well arranged and presented! Nice entry for this contest!
Best wishes to you !
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Very nice line drawing of your sister in high school. She is a pretty young woman .
Well shaped face , good show of her facial structure , nice facial features. She comes to life with your creation of her beautiful eyes!
Well arranged and presented! Nice entry for this contest!
Best wishes to you !
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, artist friend. I really appreciation your kind comments, support and best wishes.
Comment from Brendaartwork18
Very interesting interpretation of line drawing. I think probably it is a good likeness. Your transfer of lines are clear. The portrait is centred and framed well. I tried to see your starting line and where you finished. You did very well. Good luck
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Very interesting interpretation of line drawing. I think probably it is a good likeness. Your transfer of lines are clear. The portrait is centred and framed well. I tried to see your starting line and where you finished. You did very well. Good luck
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you kindly, artist friend Brenda. And, your detailed review means a lot too. I learn from various comments, especially about composition, etc.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Way West
This is an interesting work and most appropriate for the line contest. I like the various lines that make up the whole and most especially the detail of her eyes. Well done and best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This is an interesting work and most appropriate for the line contest. I like the various lines that make up the whole and most especially the detail of her eyes. Well done and best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you, artist friend Jodi. Your reviews and comments mean so much to me.