Fright
just a line drawing showing emotion10 total reviews
Comment from Glena Jessee-King
What you focused on is rendered well, the mouth and indeed shows emotion. The background and color are fine too. As good as it is, probably would be better if the sides, especially the right and down the middle of the nose were less. Still good work is what I think.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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What you focused on is rendered well, the mouth and indeed shows emotion. The background and color are fine too. As good as it is, probably would be better if the sides, especially the right and down the middle of the nose were less. Still good work is what I think.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Glena.
Thank you for your time in looking and then writing your critique on my drawing. Sometimes that is the way the face looks uneven, just like most peoples faces which are not symmetrical.
Have a good rest of your day,
cheers.
Lucien
Comment from Ray Gordon
You don't have to show much to be expressive and thats why this works so well. Munch's is a classic and is far from detailed and is a teaching point around the world. You have expressed yourself and the message is loud and clear. Very nicely done. Ray
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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You don't have to show much to be expressive and thats why this works so well. Munch's is a classic and is far from detailed and is a teaching point around the world. You have expressed yourself and the message is loud and clear. Very nicely done. Ray
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Ray,
thank you for your critique of my drawing and the 6 star rating, it all very much appreciated.
Cheers,
Lucien
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You are welcome. Ray
Comment from nikman
In my humble opinion you have achieved your goal! Your full composition and long lines, do indeed project a feeling of a man experiencing some dreadful terror. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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In my humble opinion you have achieved your goal! Your full composition and long lines, do indeed project a feeling of a man experiencing some dreadful terror. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Nikman,
thank you for your time and comments on my posting of "Fright".
I humble opinion is really appreciate and you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
Comment from Brendaartwork18
It works very well And its true line art. So pleased to see someone doing it as intended. Your "scream" is modern and recognisable. The colour pen on yellow paper is an added appeal. Good luck. I hope voters look up and know what line art definition is.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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It works very well And its true line art. So pleased to see someone doing it as intended. Your "scream" is modern and recognisable. The colour pen on yellow paper is an added appeal. Good luck. I hope voters look up and know what line art definition is.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Brenda,
thank you for your time and comments on my posting of "Fright".
We'll see if the judges agree, that this true line art as intended by the contest rules.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
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Yes Lucien we will see. True line art I live to do and did stick to the rule as defined but always intricate artwork seems to win we will see ...
Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
An interesting take on Edward Munch's famous painting. You have expressed the 'silent' scream in a few lines. You have captured the essentials of the subject. Instinctively. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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An interesting take on Edward Munch's famous painting. You have expressed the 'silent' scream in a few lines. You have captured the essentials of the subject. Instinctively. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Seshadri,
thank you for your time and comments on my posting of "Fright".
Sometime less is more. I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
Comment from jesuel
what a great piece of ar the line work is very well done I can see the emotion in the portrait and it does show fright and I like how it fills the frame fine work here
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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what a great piece of ar the line work is very well done I can see the emotion in the portrait and it does show fright and I like how it fills the frame fine work here
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Jesuel,
thank you for your time and comments on my posting of "Fright".
I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
Comment from FBI GUY
This certainly fits the category. The strong feelings this evokes is amazing. The vision of Munch's Scream jumps of the page. The flared nostrils and the stress lines along the cheekbones add the feeling. Your use of the orange paper for some reason intensifies the feeling of terror.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This certainly fits the category. The strong feelings this evokes is amazing. The vision of Munch's Scream jumps of the page. The flared nostrils and the stress lines along the cheekbones add the feeling. Your use of the orange paper for some reason intensifies the feeling of terror.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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FBI Guy,
thank you for your time and nice/detailed critique on my posting of "Fright".
I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
Comment from cleo85
Your drawing is interesting. That you are able to describe such strong emotion with a few lines is impressive.
Fright seems an understatement. The crying person seems to be terrified, sized by horror. I thought immediately at the Edward Munch painting. A shiver run through me and created goose-bumps at my skin. I also believe that in contradiction to my thoughts, most viewers will think of the famous movies, because Halloween is approaching in October and the Day of the Dead in November.
Your drawing is excellent composed and framed. The tight framing is adequate. The composition is balanced.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Your drawing is interesting. That you are able to describe such strong emotion with a few lines is impressive.
Fright seems an understatement. The crying person seems to be terrified, sized by horror. I thought immediately at the Edward Munch painting. A shiver run through me and created goose-bumps at my skin. I also believe that in contradiction to my thoughts, most viewers will think of the famous movies, because Halloween is approaching in October and the Day of the Dead in November.
Your drawing is excellent composed and framed. The tight framing is adequate. The composition is balanced.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Cleo,
thank you for your time and detailed comments on my posting of "Fright".
I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then giving such a detailed review on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
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You're very welcome, Lucien! :o)
Cheers
have a great Sunday yourself! :o)
Comment from Chaxl
This is an excellent recreation of the Scream theme. I like the limited but appropriate detail you did. The yellowish paper gives it a cool vintage look. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is an excellent recreation of the Scream theme. I like the limited but appropriate detail you did. The yellowish paper gives it a cool vintage look. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Chaxl,
thank you for your time and comments on my posting of "Fright".
I really appreciate you taking the time to look and then commenting on my art.
Have great Sunday.
Cheers,
Lucien
Comment from Montana Shooter
An interesting take on Munch painting and scream movies!
I like the background color you chose and the red highlighted lines.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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An interesting take on Munch painting and scream movies!
I like the background color you chose and the red highlighted lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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M Shooter.
thank you for your time and comments on my line drawing.
have great weekend.
Lucien