Comment from Glena Jessee-King
Yes the drawing does catch the "Surprised look" or "frightened"; either way, your emotions are captured but I know you can draw it a lot better. It does have some good line work however.

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022

Glena,
thank you for you time and critique of my drawing, it is always appreciated.
I thought for simple lines and shading it is spot on.
What does a lot better mean? more shading, more of the face?
Have great day.
Cheers,
Lucien

Comment from nikman
A good looking entry into the completion posted here! Like your tight and comprehensive review. Lines and tones are OK. A pretty good nature shot posted here!

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022

Nikman,

thank you for you time and critique of my drawing, it is always appreciated.
Have great day.
Cheers,
Lucien