Halloween Writing Ad
ad for Fanstory15 total reviews
Comment from JirinaInspire
Nice presentation of the funny content ready for the viewer to enjoy in this autumn season.
The details, flow and overall presentation are so nice to view.
As usually creative and well done!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Nice presentation of the funny content ready for the viewer to enjoy in this autumn season.
The details, flow and overall presentation are so nice to view.
As usually creative and well done!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Glad you enjoyed it and Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review
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So very much wy
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So very much welcome
Comment from Maureen Woychyshyn
A very funny and well thought out video. I like your subject matter and how you presented it. I especially love how you created the seductive moment. Very well done!!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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A very funny and well thought out video. I like your subject matter and how you presented it. I especially love how you created the seductive moment. Very well done!!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Glad you have enjoyed this and both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review
Comment from Brendaartwork18
It's good to see your work of support for both sections of this site Mark. This Halloween Writing Ad attracts the eye with colour and type script. The message is simple yet inviting. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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It's good to see your work of support for both sections of this site Mark. This Halloween Writing Ad attracts the eye with colour and type script. The message is simple yet inviting. Excellent job.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Yep I have collaborated with members on both sides..wink. Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review
Comment from Jessica Prophitt
The jokes made me legitimately laugh. The lighting is great. Not too bright and not too dark. Sometimes people like to make things too dark for a Halloween esthetic but that is not an issue here. The poster is cohesive to the video. And the poster is simple, straight, and to the point. I would say to make the font bigger on the poster. That is just so when people are scrolling by, it's easier to read. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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The jokes made me legitimately laugh. The lighting is great. Not too bright and not too dark. Sometimes people like to make things too dark for a Halloween esthetic but that is not an issue here. The poster is cohesive to the video. And the poster is simple, straight, and to the point. I would say to make the font bigger on the poster. That is just so when people are scrolling by, it's easier to read. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Good point about the font. I'm glad you able to see one of the videos..oh btw there is a part to this video for the Halloween poem contest. Check it out when you get the time. (thumbs up)..both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review
Comment from Lynnmarie2
I am planning on signing up but just not in the budget right now paying for both sites. I do really want to join but maybe not until next year :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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I am planning on signing up but just not in the budget right now paying for both sites. I do really want to join but maybe not until next year :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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I'm not a poet
And I know it
Don't panic
I'm just a comic
When you become the wiser
You realize Im just the advertiser
Wink .lol
Both. Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review.
Comment from Ray Gordon
Mark, I consider this to be one of your best. So clever and great plot and story line. I think many will be inspired to step into the arena and bear their souls after seeing this.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Mark, I consider this to be one of your best. So clever and great plot and story line. I think many will be inspired to step into the arena and bear their souls after seeing this.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Don't know if you saw the other one but this the first part of 2 part story ad. The second one is the Halloween poem. If you didn't catch it check it out. Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review
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Mark you are welcome, nice job. Ray
Comment from Marko Paradisi
great ad! intriguing and draws attention to the halloween stories contest. the skeleton and the girl are here to read over your stories and pass their judgment over drinks i see
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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great ad! intriguing and draws attention to the halloween stories contest. the skeleton and the girl are here to read over your stories and pass their judgment over drinks i see
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thanks! Many more coming..stay tuned! Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review (thumbs up)
Comment from Lisa Davey
This is funny, the girl seems to be looking at the skeleton with a slight air of repulsion but she's pretty creepy herself. Interesting scene, are they on a date? I'm not sure what's happening but it certainly got my attention...lol!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This is funny, the girl seems to be looking at the skeleton with a slight air of repulsion but she's pretty creepy herself. Interesting scene, are they on a date? I'm not sure what's happening but it certainly got my attention...lol!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Lisa did you hear the audio on it? Comical skit with ad. Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the good review.
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Hi Mk, I only saw the image.
I looked again but still no audio on my end. Sorry.
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Just found the video, that's hysterical. I guess I would say your opening image was perfect because it told the story without having to watch the video... Multiple Thumbs Up my Friend!
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Ty..more coming..stay tuned.wink
Comment from Glena Jessee-King
This is lovely, simple, but to the point in advertising. I like the animation of the girl on the right and the three artwork pieces as though they are entries. I played the portion about three times but was unsure if the work after, "Our contests are ?"
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This is lovely, simple, but to the point in advertising. I like the animation of the girl on the right and the three artwork pieces as though they are entries. I played the portion about three times but was unsure if the work after, "Our contests are ?"
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Not certain what you are asking? Thanks for the review
Comment from bpellephoto
MK this is a quantum leap from where I first came in.
This is smooth - it has a nice steady flow that delivers a smooth steady stream of visual stimulation.
The graphics are first rate as is the music.
Congratulations for you have come of age and have found your stride... Bob
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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MK this is a quantum leap from where I first came in.
This is smooth - it has a nice steady flow that delivers a smooth steady stream of visual stimulation.
The graphics are first rate as is the music.
Congratulations for you have come of age and have found your stride... Bob
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Working on the for the Halloween contest on our side..it will have comedy but a different scene..stay tuned! Wink. Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review