Comment from Alexandra Trovato 8
Glena,

This is a beautiful and interesting sketch. It looks a lot like what I have for breakfast, daily. It is very clear and drawn well. The composition is well balanced. The viewer imagines the person eating has begun by peeling a banana. Great work!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2025

Comment from Phyllis Marconi
This is a very nice still art breakfast scene. The dimension, lights and shadow are great. Every item is so life like. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2025

Comment from Brendaartwork18
Gl3nda I like this still life arrangement. The skillfull drawing is evident and the items make a balanced scene. My only observation that I consider would improve impact is heavier shading between the orange and the mug and in shadow outline under the banana. The overall presentation is good. So nice to see your work again.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2025

Comment from Elisabetta Warner
Goodafternoon
Such a lovely sketch
You really brought out all your subjects with just shading
Nice healthy breakfast
Thank you for sharing
Hope this helps

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2025

Comment from Photopeb
Initial/Visual impact
5
Creativity/Presentation
5
Contrast/tones
5
Center of interest
5
Highlights/Shadows
5
Technique
5
Technical excellence
5
Storytelling ability
5

Very lovely piece of artwork Glena! Love the composition and layout. Very good initial and visual impact. Excellent creativity and presentation. Very good center of interest and storytelling ability. Very pleasing highlights and shadows. Very nice details with good technique and high technical excellence. A pleasure to view. Thanks for sharing!

Paul

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2025

Comment from shore1inspire.
A Very Nice Drawing, and entry that may make the Viewer Hungry. nice detail with subjects so close to life size thinking the viewer can handle IT IF, You know.
Enjoy Your breakfast,
Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 25-May-2025

Thanks for your beautiful and encouraging review.

Comment from helvi2
Hi Glena, you did a great job of drawing this breakfast scene. Love how you arranged the fruit, cereal and coffee. Nice detail in all the subjects. Very fitting for the BW contest! Good Luck!
:o) Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

THANK YOU, my KIND FRIEND.

Comment from Devonte Baker
I like the detail that you put forward into drawing this picture. The different line textures are amazing. Thank you so for sharing this! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Thank you much, Devonte.

Comment from Maureen Woychyshyn
Yes, looks like a very yummy breakfast that you've presented here. From the bowl of cereal to the coffee perhaps and the wonderful fruit. Really well done good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Thank you so much, artist friend.

Comment from alaskapat
Very nice sketch of breakfast.
We see the orange half abd the banana that is half peeled . The bowl of cereal and the cup of coffee. This is a healthy breakfast . Very well rendered with such good attention to the details, I like the way this breakfast is arranged in the table.
I also like the black and white . This is an awesome entry for this contest.
Very best wishes to you !

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Thank you so much, kind artist and photographer friend. I really appreciate this fine review.